Reviews of Becoming A Tree Isn't That Bad, Right?

I'm going to shamelessly write my own review here. This story is definitely something. I was actually a little bit hesitant at first, hesitating if I should write this of not because it isn't really my usual genre. But I can atleast tell you that I am glad I did.

This novel was far more interesting than I thought it would be. A very pleasant surprise. I'm also extremely curious with the 'romance' tag so it means he'll turn back into a human - or FL will turn into a tree? heh. Writing Quality: Great and improves even more as the chapter progresses. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith, considering Author does release it daily. Story Development: It's only 11 chapters for now, but it's really getting interesting. Seeing this from the perspective of a tree is quite refreshing. There are funny moments, too, especially with the Cow. Cow should have a name, me thinks. Character Design & World Background: unique, wonderful and interesting. All in all, I truly did enjoy the novel. Added to the library. Keep up the good work, Author!

Basically a boy dies while he sleeps and then is reborn as a tree. Interesting persona I think because usually spirits of trees are usually female lol. Hopeful wasn't a gender switch, but I don't mind that.

Great so far I hop we get a wide variety of different characters visiting the tree so we can get multiple character perspectives of protagonist

Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok

This is a review of the first 13 chapters. This story is about a 16 year old boy who died and then transmigrated into a tree in a fantasy world. The boy, MarySue like character, narrates most of the story. However, the protagonist of the story seems to be the female character. The female lead, a knight magician, has to resolve her internal conflict between hurting/killing a sentinel being and saving her follower. Overall, there are few grammar mistakes. There are awkward sentences and strange word choices. These issues do not effect the plot. The plot is action based with comic relief. The comic relief moments are situation based. The reader will find them funny or as overly detailed descriptions.

I have read the first chapter. I find it an intriguing story. There is a murder involved, Murder and suspense mystery, who is the culprit? Adding to my library to read.

This is part of a review swap, valid for chapter 11 Writing Quality: 4/5 Not giving out the full 5 stars because although the writing flows well and helps form a picture in the readers mind. I believe there's still room for improvement. A few minor errors. Chapter 2--> "Moooo (.) - don't forget the fullstop Chapter 10- Its --> It'(s) She had finally --> (remove the had) She finally managed A thought once again found itself Lukes head (think there is a missing word here.--> found itself in Luke(')s head. • D_Don't just watch t_here --> D—on't just watch t—here Chapter 11- blocking his eyes, glinting (there's a space) Luke: ...---> should be ---> Luke, "..." The spacing for the paragraphs is really good though, we don't get a huge bunch of text. The best thing to do with minor mistakes is using editing writing software's like grammarly. Character Design: 5/5 For the character design, the MC is male Haven't read one of those in awhile. 🤔 The FL doesn't leave much of an impression yet. All I'm getting from the male lead too is that he's very uhh accepting of his situation? Despite his confusion, he isn't freaking out or panicking. Story Development and world background : The plot itself is very interesting. This is my third review for the writing contest tree prompt, but it takes on a different route then the other tree stories. By different route, I'm talking about the romance aspect. Writing a story regarding a tree is already difficult enough since the author is limited on movement and speech. But this allows the author to focus on the setting and character thoughts.

At first,I did'nt find it appealing but after reading the chapters until the end(though it's not yet the "end" end),it took my interest cause the further I read,it becomes more entertaining.l can't wait for the romantic part! :]