DamnPlotArmor
It was an ok self insert, until the protagonist did a 180 after claiming he didn't want to be a harem protagonist, and sticks his dick in a disgusting cannibal girl, cheating on the girl he's supposedly in love with. For a fucking disgusting cannibal... Yeah I don't even fucking understand anymore, it's like the author just couldn't keep it in his pants all of a sudden, we already had a romance subplot going on, and the author just straight up ruins it out of the blue after previously committing to not doing so :|
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DAMNABLY THE BEST HISTORICAL ORIGINAL IN WEBNOVEL!!!!!!!!!!! SO CAPTIVATING AND ADDICTING!!!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU AUTHOR< WHAT DID YOU DO TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR~~~~ Haha, just kidding, while I'm so in love with the story, I don't mind waiting every hour (and dying inside while at it) every day for the update.
Writing Quality : It isn't the best but at least you can understand the gist of what they are saying. Stability Update : Author at least has done what he has promised. Story Development : The story often times lack at providing necessary information for things that needed to be and provides to much that some chapters became fillers instead on things that does not need to be focused about. Character Design : The randomness on how a character develops and with most of them being asinine at certain things while being "competent" on other things makes the character from being fleshed - out. World Background : Author is trying to make fill out the flaws he makes at the plot holes by adding so many things to the story that he doesn't realized the mere fact that if you re-read each chapter and try to connect them and think about it good enough then you will see evidence that the story itself contradicts its' own plot. More explanation and introduction leads to many more of them while trying to make them go meld each other in the story leads to it being disrupted from it's original self that without realizing it isn't the same story where you have read at the start.
pretty interesting and weird? story background. starting off as a policeman and killing a criminal he gets sent to hell and gets entangled with demons. story progresses and he gets sent to a "game world"? where he gets powers and stuff while clearing missions. story is pretty interesting and written nicely. a plot twist by the author had a little bit of backlash from a lot of the readers though but its getting through that now
interesting story that is based on the three kingdom era with a interesting twist based on a game, story writing quality is pretty good with at least a chapter a day although it is premium, character is designed pretty originally with some twists you wouldnt expect. overall good read so far and hope it doesnt change