Review Detail of Demsaw in Battle Royale of the Sinners

Writing Quality : It isn't the best but at least you can understand the gist of what they are saying. Stability Update : Author at least has done what he has promised. Story Development : The story often times lack at providing necessary information for things that needed to be and provides to much that some chapters became fillers instead on things that does not need to be focused about. Character Design : The randomness on how a character develops and with most of them being asinine at certain things while being "competent" on other things makes the character from being fleshed - out. World Background : Author is trying to make fill out the flaws he makes at the plot holes by adding so many things to the story that he doesn't realized the mere fact that if you re-read each chapter and try to connect them and think about it good enough then you will see evidence that the story itself contradicts its' own plot. More explanation and introduction leads to many more of them while trying to make them go meld each other in the story leads to it being disrupted from it's original self that without realizing it isn't the same story where you have read at the start.