Review Detail of Dontlookdown in Battle Royale of the Sinners

I normally dont leave a review when my chapter count is so low, but goddamn does this story have some problems. And the problen with these problems is that some can not be rectified without a rewrite. So, the problems? Well, one is the lack of mystery. Instead of spreading the plot out and having the mc discover the "truth" along with the readers, it is dumped during the prologue. In fact, the biggest questions left unanswered is why the system in heaven/hell is such bull****. Wich leads to the next point. The villian is a pointless pos. How bad is he? Think the standard wuxia 1d baddie and magnify his flaws by 50. And guess what? Heaven lets the guys mother give him ULTIMATE POWER!!! How powerful? I wanted to chuck my phone across the room when i first read his cheats. Then i learned there were more cheats after the first batch. Thats when i broke, along with my phone after it sailed a good 20 feet across my room. This leads to my next point. The author does not dissapoint with his name. The plot armor is real. Very real. Except the plot armor is for other people as well, the mc does not hold a monopoly on it. The logical flaws in this are absolutely mind boggling. The system used for karma, heaven itself, the lack of explanation for anything, it really makes me angry. I nearly suffered an anuerism after coming across some of these. So the good? Well, bonus pointa for creativity i guess. Grammar is second rate as of now, not too bad, but not too good. Its not that there is nothing to enjoy here, i just cant pinpoint it. In all honesty, i will continue to read this novel, after i can bring myself to forgive the authors choice to use a shop that gives out free powerups of unlimited power to the baddie. Props to you author, i have not been so riled up by a novel in a long time. Hopefully the story improves, ill leave another review if so.