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Noleafyet
NoleafyetAuthorNoleafyet

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Gaureeey
GaureeeyLv1Gaureeey

Hi there!! The language in your book is very rich sometimes which is lovely, I love how you have included phrases and words to stimulate the reader's ears and the earlier chapters gave a very in-depth view about the character's journey. TIP! you could maybe just tryyy to make each chapter a little less lengthy so it can account as newer chapters, awaiting more chapters if you'll write more!

ZABbbbbb
ZABbbbbbLv3ZABbbbbb

Woah, author! I've been completely wowed by your work. This is a fine piece of art that definitely needs more views and more exposure. In terms of writing, you're pitch-perfect with nothing to complain about and if anyone did, that would be nitpicking. Dear author-sama, you're a gem in rough. I admire you to great lengths! Keep up the good work!

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

I really like your story! I enjoyed the reading :) The text, grammar, punctuation, vocabulary - well polished. Addictive storyline, expressive characters, intersting descriptions! I like the POV - 1st person, writing from that point of view it's challenging, it's also a big plus for the story. Keep doing the excellent job!

zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14zetsubouaichan

This book is written in the first person POV. The writing was good and easy to get into. I like how the author spent time with the MC's background and I think the MC had an interesting background. At this point was still early to tell where the story will lead us to. However, I'm really curious about what will happen to MC and how will her past life help her in this new world. Hoping that there will be interesting main and supporting characters to make the story interesting since there is a comedy tag in this book. Good luck, author!

sae_boo
sae_booLv10sae_boo

Grammar, punctuation, fluidity is all excellent from the author. Flawless flow as you read through, the author is really good with words. This seems more of a book rather than a novel! I must applaud the author for that! The lead's journeying adventure is really interesting, the authors attention to detail is remarkable. Also the internal monologue is superb from what I've read when comparing to other novels of the same genre... I honest to God don't have much criticism, apart from being mad i binge read it, so i want to see what happens next lol! [img=recommend] I will be following this series good job author.....

Maryixxx
MaryixxxLv4Maryixxx

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Nekonigiri001
Nekonigiri001Lv11Nekonigiri001

Reading this made me feel like I'm an audience watching a theatre. Nicely written, easy to read and managed to capture attention. Also, the way it was written was enough for me to be lost in it. I hope the author would keep on writing and share with us the journey. All the best in the contest! :)

Kystal88
Kystal88Lv2Kystal88

Your story reads well, the sentences and grammar are constructed with care. You create a great feeling of bond with the MC, and so you're rooting for her even if you don't know it! The descriptions were vivid and imaginative. I look forward to reading more!

Darlene_Virginia
Darlene_VirginiaLv4Darlene_Virginia

Interesting story. The writing style is unique and the development of the story is smooth. Waiting for more chapters in the future. Good luck author! Happy writing.

Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicLv2Alpha_Medic

I really like that you took so much time to develop your MC ahead of sending them to another world. It's a very big gamble, considering the typical Fantasy genre reader hopes to jump right into the action. I think you did an amazing job with it, though, and it really made me feel for your MC. Please keep up the good work, Author, I look forward to reading more!

TheElisse
TheElisseLv2TheElisse

Even thought the book has just started, I am loving it. There isn't anything I wouldn't like. So far so good. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more

Carciphones_02
Carciphones_02Lv3Carciphones_02

I can't believe what I read!!!! But I also realized that this novel is really interesting!!! in addition to the female Main character!!(I am biased when It come to the MC) I really like the world building and your Main character's journey!! Not just like!! I am moved!!! truth to be told, I want to write my novel exactly like this!! trying to see the Wonder of the world!! going on a journey, meeting all kind of beautiful and bad things, creating memories!! Overall, this novel really make my heartbeats go *badump badump!!* You are great!!!!!! щ(゜ロ゜щ)

Anotoki
AnotokiLv11Anotoki

The story itself is well done, you did a good job Grammars, punctuation, and even the text are no problems, but you could still improve it to another level, don't stay the same forever! The mc is really funny and cute(This my opinion okay?!), she makes you wanted to protect her.

augustwrites
augustwritesLv1augustwrites

A very interesting take on the LitRPG genre. However what distinguishes this author is the writing. Much higher quality than the average novel you find on this site.

midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv13midnight_bloom

Great work! This novel deserves more attention. Author's storytelling is so effective that I've been completely immersed and invested into the story as the chapters progress. Keep on writing, author. All the best.

moonbceyy
moonbceyyLv1moonbceyy

It's all 5 for me! I loved every chapter and how you wrote it in the first POV because I myself can't interestingly do a first POV, and you did it so well! I love your use of words, and I hope to be as good as you!

outpost76
outpost76Lv3outpost76

Interesting transmigration, died with a smile and there was no truck. I like the writing style and it's actually one of the few first person novels I've read. I find her personality a bit weird but I'm not a fan of comedy so that might be the reason. The story is a bit slow for me but it was a good read overall and I might check it out some more

Andru_9788
Andru_9788Lv4Andru_9788

This is an amazing masterpiece with a fluid flow of events. The way its written actually makes you visualise the scenes in your mind. Great job author.

cherryiako
cherryiakoLv13cherryiako

What an interesting story. I keep flipping the next chapter. I can't get enough of it. I was supposed to do work but instead, here I am, reading this book. Great job author. Keep going on writing. [img=recommend]