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Hi there!! The language in your book is very rich sometimes which is lovely, I love how you have included phrases and words to stimulate the reader's ears and the earlier chapters gave a very in-depth view about the character's journey. TIP! you could maybe just tryyy to make each chapter a little less lengthy so it can account as newer chapters, awaiting more chapters if you'll write more!
Woah, author! I've been completely wowed by your work. This is a fine piece of art that definitely needs more views and more exposure. In terms of writing, you're pitch-perfect with nothing to complain about and if anyone did, that would be nitpicking. Dear author-sama, you're a gem in rough. I admire you to great lengths! Keep up the good work!
I really like your story! I enjoyed the reading :) The text, grammar, punctuation, vocabulary - well polished. Addictive storyline, expressive characters, intersting descriptions! I like the POV - 1st person, writing from that point of view it's challenging, it's also a big plus for the story. Keep doing the excellent job!
This book is written in the first person POV. The writing was good and easy to get into. I like how the author spent time with the MC's background and I think the MC had an interesting background. At this point was still early to tell where the story will lead us to. However, I'm really curious about what will happen to MC and how will her past life help her in this new world. Hoping that there will be interesting main and supporting characters to make the story interesting since there is a comedy tag in this book. Good luck, author!
Grammar, punctuation, fluidity is all excellent from the author. Flawless flow as you read through, the author is really good with words. This seems more of a book rather than a novel! I must applaud the author for that! The lead's journeying adventure is really interesting, the authors attention to detail is remarkable. Also the internal monologue is superb from what I've read when comparing to other novels of the same genre... I honest to God don't have much criticism, apart from being mad i binge read it, so i want to see what happens next lol! [img=recommend] I will be following this series good job author.....
I really like that you took so much time to develop your MC ahead of sending them to another world. It's a very big gamble, considering the typical Fantasy genre reader hopes to jump right into the action. I think you did an amazing job with it, though, and it really made me feel for your MC. Please keep up the good work, Author, I look forward to reading more!
I can't believe what I read!!!! But I also realized that this novel is really interesting!!! in addition to the female Main character!!(I am biased when It come to the MC) I really like the world building and your Main character's journey!! Not just like!! I am moved!!! truth to be told, I want to write my novel exactly like this!! trying to see the Wonder of the world!! going on a journey, meeting all kind of beautiful and bad things, creating memories!! Overall, this novel really make my heartbeats go *badump badump!!* You are great!!!!!! щ(゜ロ゜щ)
Interesting transmigration, died with a smile and there was no truck. I like the writing style and it's actually one of the few first person novels I've read. I find her personality a bit weird but I'm not a fan of comedy so that might be the reason. The story is a bit slow for me but it was a good read overall and I might check it out some more