joshua_jt3
The author has a unique approach on the story as he switches perspective between engaging with the readers and strorytelling. In fact, it was rather immersiveā that is until cut scenes of information jump into the picture and leaves one lamenting the sudden disruption! Some people might think, I donāt like info dumb, and straight up quit from readingā¦ Well, donāt quit just yet! The story has got potential in it (coming from someone who read a very populare novel with a similar theme.)
Iām not sure how to write a good review, but Iāll try. So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesnāt soffucates the reader. The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action. The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way. The story doesnāt seem to present plotholes that wonāt, or canāt, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive. Though Iām singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didnāt find any. Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but donāt have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room). As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, weāre in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed. I donāt think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
This was an amazing read! I love how the world (setting) was slowly brought into the picture, along with the technology, the crystals, etc. Although I donāt typically read this genre, this was incredibly written. Though there are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, it doesnāt decrease the quality of the writing whatsoever. Keep it up!
Other than writing quality and world back ground which are both a 4.. everything else is subpar.. I was reading this book around 6:30 pm while I am at work and I kid you not I felt so bored that I almost sleptā¦ this is the most boring and weakest werewolf story everā¦ I digressā¦ a shame really I liked the world background the vibe was there.. I read to 30 chapters I skip about 10 and I still felt like I didnāt miss much.. all and all just a boring book..