READ BEFORE THE STORY
As you know this is my first fanfic so don't expect much from me also English is NOT my main language so if there are some grammatical errors I can only ask you to inform me about it.
Now I know you're wondering why don't I just get some grammatical correction shit, it's because I'm writing this on my PHONE, I'm planning on installing webnovel on my computer but seeing this as only a hobby I didn't do it.
As for the fight scenes, I can get creative about it but again if you have some opinions you like to share im willing to see it, i accept criticism since the purpose of this fanfiction is not only for entertainment but also improve my writing skills
And of COURSE the famous R-18, to be honest with you I'm shameless enough to put the R-18 tag despite only being 15 YEARS OLD
that's right I'm only a kid writing for fun, so again if there are some scenes which could be considered childish or immature then please you know what to do.
As for the lemons I'm gonna do something about it however it still up to you if you really want me to write it BUT if you did agree then I'm gonna use my knowledge as man of culture in order to write something that may satisfy your needs so again inform me about it.
As for the relationships i considered it a hard part since I at least want it to be realistic, I don't want to copy Yun Che who basically rape Chu Yuechan to 'save' her and some bullshit that she ended up falling in love to Scum Che so yeah I probably lost my common sense after reading xianxia novels anyway I want it to be realistic and not forced like Cang Yue falling in love with the MC because I saw his karma or something and then *bam* proceeds to fuck each other out.
Also there maybe some cannon parts since Okhwang is not an MC that reincarnated in ATG and basically know the plot of the story.
He's overpowered and can destroy the planet if he wants but he's not aware of the incoming danger so I'm gonna have to ask you to bear with the story since I'm gonna add some bullshit in order to balance the story so don't be surprised if Tathagata had come knocking on Okhwang's door with a gift basket.
As for my opinion about The Jade Emperor, well he's arrogant we all know that but that doesn't mean he has no morals or honor and after his death his perspective of humans had changed so the King will also have his own improvement in the story while still maintaining his own character such
And for last, i mostly forgot the Plot about ATG so most of my knowledge came from wiki or other fanfictions so again bear with me please, I'm planning on rereading it in order to get a good control over the plot while maintaining the balance on Okhwang's character and if you want to ask why i didn't continue reading the original well....
FUCK SCUM CHE! He's a hypocrite, he's arrogant but has no power to back it up and if it wasn't for Jasmine or the Sky Poison Pearl then I'm sure he's dead on day one so maybe some of you understand it or not but I don't want to read his Trash tale again
