waryfishy
I've read until chapter 20 and I've enjoyed it so far though I have to say, I have never felt the gravity of the situation or the hardships that the MC had dealt with. The near-death experience, revelation of his parents and his victory over Jamie seems so weightless. It didn't leave any impact on me when I was reading this, maybe its just me but the pacing was fast enough to overlook the weight oc the situations he had been in.
Very nice. I admit the quality took me by surprise. There was one thing that I didn't like at first(concernign Jon,) but as I kept reading I stopped caring about that and somewhere along the way it somehow turned into a positive. The fanfic is that good. Another thing I like is the fast pacing. I don't know if this temporary(I'm at chapter 18 as of this moment,) but I think it was a good choice.
Good story ..... please try to complete it dont drop it .............................. ....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฝ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐