LivingVoid
50 chapters in and it's one of my favorite reads. It isn't an info dump CN BS, it gets straight to the point and every chapter has something new to offer. The grammar quality is also pretty good, considering how most of the authors here aren't native speakers. At the beginning there was a slight problem that I didn't like, but it was well worth it because the story improves significantly in the later chapters and a plot twist that would drastically change the world, for the better of our amusement. The MC isn't a Mary Sue, but he's strong & feels very humane. Not much to say about other characters because there ain't much chapters to flesh them out; however, there are some characters that I already like, like: Amos, Verni and Tarto. Update stability is okay, I guess. I don't have much opinion on this 'cause I really suck at it myself. World building... I don't want to spoil it, so go read it for yourselves and it would speak for itself how much work is put into it. 9.99/10 as of now. Will change it to 10 if the quality doesn't drop and gets better.
This story starts off following Zevien who feels more like a person as instead of confessing to the person he loves straight away and them accepting him he doesnt have the courage which makes him feel more vulnerable as a person and more real as if he was a person you could meet in real life. The grammer in the novel is on point clearly an well made by the person writing it. The plot is detailed as it has complex characters and events. This is definitely something you would want to pur in your library and i hope you do.
i personally would rate it a 5 cause its one of the best i have ever read but it just needs more chapters honestly but in akl seriousness the characters like zev and verny (if i remember her nickname correctly) are excellent characters 1) i like how the characters are designed and the back ground of each one we have seen especially zev and verny(if thats her nickname) 2) the writing quality is better than most theres very few english mistakes if any at all like 1 evry 5 chapters i think(estimate obviously) 3) tbis story isnt an info dump story where they provide with a whole bunch if info that make no sense but its enough so yoi cab understand everything and not be vonfueed to be like oh this is why like 100 chapters down the road when the event finally happens (even tho certain scenarios should be like that ive read novels where they claim it not info dump but the problem is the fact that they hoard info you need in the story but this story has a perfect balance so far) SPOILERS BELOW 4) only problems really is that zev friends didn't believe him when he said he cane from the future i mean i wouldn't fully believe him but i would make sure to take it with a grain a salt maybe a little more because he has info that he should not have and knows things he shouldn't but it is understandable but that just my OPINION all these are MY OPINIONS every one has different OPINIONS
Hey man, I guess I am one of the really early reader. I was reading this book before you decided to change the name of the book and you rewrote the series. I think it happened when it was on chapter 32. 🤔 Just saying from what I remember I loved the series and was really upset that you stooped it to rewrite it so I completely forgot about it. I just decided to scroll through my library and saw it sitting all the way down at the bottom on chapter 32. So I decided to tap on it and I saw what it was about and I was happy it got over 150 chapter. Thanks!!..
The MC makes smart decisions and you won't be frustrated with the mc and his decisions. He is hardworking and takes advantage of opportunities and his future knowledge. when it seems like he is trapped he manages to find a way out and you will never be annoyed or upset with the MC. It is serious, sad, funny, etc, it's all balanced to keep the readers entertained.