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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Would restructure the dialogue to "Go, go. Don't waste our time," or to just use 1 "Go"
I smell something grim
You can also shorten "I am" to "I'm", most people would
the S in "meters" is unnecessary
That comma makes it sound like the leader was talking to Alucard. Would suggest removing it to "that Alucard?"
a nice little detail on that last bit, honestly wasn't expecting that
This paragraph sounds weird to me, could you explain the intention of this paragraph? Might be able to take a clue of what needs to be fixed.
"becoming a 5th class magician"
I sense some genius spell weaving.
"the more 'physical' the chalice became"
I would restructure it to "Looks like the chalice isn't a 'physical' item." Though, if you want to keep a similar structure, then I would suggest changing "didn't" to "doesn't" since "doesn't" is an abbreviation for "does not", and using "did not" (or didn't) is grammatically incorrect.
Had to double check this, but apparently you can use both "toward" and "towards" here. I personally would use "towards" because it sounds natural in this case, but it's a matter of preference.
I am to I'm, simpler and sound more natural
Or that you accidentally added a quotation mark at the start of that description for the spell.
You forgot the closing quotation mark at the end
Would argue that using "durability" rather than "defenses" is better, since it's obvious that the main usage of defense-type spells are to defend.
Luckier. Using "more lucky" doesn't sound natural at all.
The comment earlier doesn't apply on this, oddly. But that's just how English works.
"rock paper scissors" if you don't want to include "and" after "paper,"