As Jin Mori in Solo Leveling

I'm on chapter 3. Nice concept but very poor in execution. Like 10 y.o write this.

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a great read overall i just have a few concerns please don't make jin mori one shot everyone

good and interesting storytelling ,waiting for Jin Mori's journey to become more interesting

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everthings good and dandy except starting story development and world background cause nothing makes logical sense right now ps { only twelve chapter right now so there may be improvement or degradation of story who knows }

its not bad, need a few more chapters to decide, but 5 stars for jin mori!

I want more author is a great FF please update

from the story title this fanfic was promising, but after some chapter it turned out this fanfic another wish fulfillment fast paced fanfic. i think this fanfic will be quite a fun read as long as you shut down your brain when reading it.

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it's like a bad translation but there's no errors and it's actually funny

The story is very good, I hope the character sees the end and that it doesn't end in the middle like many Solo Leveling stories.[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

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