Sheroe_Alpha

please continue the premise is good and please don't drop the story.

I have high hopes bro please don't drop the fic it has potential if you having write block try TS RBW it was a good adaptation of the power good luck 🍀

mandatory review for the day scp stories are always a good read just please please adhere to the court tenants of the foundation to to secure contain protect 😁🗡️🗡️

It's honestly one of the best Warhammer fics I've read the dialogue flows nicely world building is written great my only criticism is that it feels like an idealistic take on Warhammer there's no setback or any suspense the warp is nerfed so hard and any problem are solved for plot convenience not all problems needs to solve and put some flaws/limits to the main characters it would make a better story seeing the overcome they gradually that all sorry for the rant i hope for the best for and this story 🍻🍻🍻

thanks for the chapter

For me it was perfect the writing execution to the sequence of events mwa 10/10👌 on an unrelated note have you ever considered writing an ff about captain jack Sparrow in GOT or something like that .

I highly recommend trying out this fic high respect for the author for the way he integrated his original characters and form new subplot for the story of overlord i actually see this story as a spinoff of the cannon storyline there is no conflict with the source material and create an immersive world building 🎊🎉🍚🍚🍚🎉🎊🍻

the story was on point the characters were not two different from their original themes and actually a pretty interesting story overall create writing by the way good job author

perfecto 👌 absolutely amazing in writing quality action on point comedy peak badass female e characters mc is not one dimensional highly recommend to read

thanks for the chapter but you should mix things up na the stories it's getting repetitive add some exploration chapter or something thanks [img=More pls][img=More pls]