If you can't think of why there would be more unsullied than regular slaves on an isolated island, then that is your fault not mine

There are unsullied, but from the latest chapter he only has 100 people, and the pop is split between 80% Unsullied and 14% regular slaves from the chapter this comment is on.

Did you even read the previous paragraph? Maybe later on the author calls them the unsullied, but these slaves are, as stated inches away from this comment, that they are sickly and abandoned slaves.

Okay robot

Who is Elegance?

Please stop adding a - to the paragraphs. Punctuation rules in writing are bad enough without people adding to it.

If you read the comment again properly, that is what he said.

Use either He and Him or I and Me, do not mix and change them.

The only reason he shouldn't use the points right now is that it could be easier to naturally grow stronger with training

Another poorly thought out fantasy from the authors at webnovel. AU is to be expected, but why would anyone want to read about OC characters wearing the faces of popular waifus? First you make Rias Gremory, a pretty kind hearted character to those close to her excluding the arranged marriage into someone who would cheapshot her younger, weaker brother from behind, but then you make it so Grafiya is on first name terms with the MC instead of having her play into the maid fetish when she is a maid who in the original work called her husband, the father of her child master? Then, the system is nerfed so that the MC doesn't receive stat points like the original system, and you make him arrogant in his first life and death battle against 5 equal opponents, that he commented on. Then, there is the silly idea that you shouldn't rely on items to fight. In DxD. There are thirteen other reasons why this makes you look like a Dumbass. I hope you actually read this instead of deleting it.

Author made a patreon for a story with a mistake in the second paragraph. The future of fanfics is dim indeed.

A career ninja suddenly got worried when her husband, who was flawlessly winning, was in a fight? Where is the absolute trust she was showing? Maybe she should die if she is this stupid

To be honest, I wish that some authors would google something like "proper sentence structure" or use free spelling/grammar checks so that I can actually enjoy the story. For example, sometimes the author will put a full stop in the middle of a sentence , the author will put a space in between a comma and a word like the one I just put, and they don't even bother to capitalise every name, so for someone who hasn't read the original, I had no idea if solderat or whatever it was was meant as a title or a name. This is the fairest score I could give for someone who takes no effort to spell check or correct obvious mistakes like writing careful as care full, or putting an expy character in for a fetish.

Or even better, a nose bleed

Great Translation, not perfect but that's fine.

Yeah, there is no need for mysterious people in the shadows who know everything, just ruins the story.

Commas aren't meant to be placed randomly author. Separating one sentence in two with a comma makes two incomplete sentences that do not make sense alone, and that is really annoying.

Word count chapters are a plague on my phones poor processing capability. If you don't think you can personally stick around to reach the benchmark of a visible story, then you should go and write on a better app or site.

Not in the DC Verse I wouldn't

No no, a sacred gear is obviously a sandwich, it's right there in the name!