Reviews of An immortal hero MARVELXDC
An immortal hero MARVELXDC
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I'm simply getting tired of the amount of rewriting that happened, This story was phenomenal in every rewrite it turns out great but then you will just repeat the same thing drop suddenly then just return with another rewrite and that also includes your other story in marvel which I wish that you don't drop, maybe your facing things in your life or you're a perfectionist that wants to make the best story but that doesn't;t happen by rewriting your story before finishing it. You should finish the story and then do it again with your new experience bye
I had to delete a review I made at Chapter 11 just because of Chapter 13. The writing quality is ok with small errors in spelling and grammar. The updates as of this moment are often, though I am unaware of a set schedule. The story development starts off ok but the MC seems to devolve as the story progress. He gets extreme power growth at the cost of character growth??? The stories concept is good but the chapters feel forced after about 5, the author needs to slow down and plan their direction. The MC feels like an 18 year old that has been emotionally stunted at 10 years of age. The story describes events in his life that would most likely have helped him mature faster emotionally then stop so unaware of a reason for this. The other characters are so far basic with no standouts. The world is almost not described at all up to this point so it’s still up in the air. The story has a lot of potential, especially at the start, so the other should slow it down. Rewriting some chapters and planning more would help.
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.
Soy el exp de mi Revisión de las Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel es mi cuerpo, exp es mi sangre. He creado más de mil reseñas inútiles. Desconocido para dormir, ni conocido por la realidad. He resistido a Cliff-Kun para crear muchas críticas. Sin embargo, estas manos nunca sostendrán nada. Entonces, mientras rezo ... ¡Obras ilimitadas de Exp!
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