Review Detail of Pclerk in An immortal hero MARVELXDC

I had to delete a review I made at Chapter 11 just because of Chapter 13. The writing quality is ok with small errors in spelling and grammar. The updates as of this moment are often, though I am unaware of a set schedule. The story development starts off ok but the MC seems to devolve as the story progress. He gets extreme power growth at the cost of character growth??? The stories concept is good but the chapters feel forced after about 5, the author needs to slow down and plan their direction. The MC feels like an 18 year old that has been emotionally stunted at 10 years of age. The story describes events in his life that would most likely have helped him mature faster emotionally then stop so unaware of a reason for this. The other characters are so far basic with no standouts. The world is almost not described at all up to this point so it’s still up in the air. The story has a lot of potential, especially at the start, so the other should slow it down. Rewriting some chapters and planning more would help.