Reviews of Amorous Time Travel (18+)

Sorry for the ‘shameless’ five-stars I’ve given my own novel; because I admit, I’m super-biased. First of all, the basics: unlike all of my previous novels, this one will NOT be written in third-person omnipresent view, it’ll be written in third-person singular/limited view, which means that even though all of the characters have thoughts of their owns, it won’t be told when the narrator is talking about the mc’s feelings, it’ll be shown in another chapter. The second: this entire novel has offensive content such as, but not limited to – s e x scenes, dark or maybe weird humor and the every present lewd scenes. Third: this novel will NOT be as depressing or as fillerish as my other novel, it’ll be more direct and more vanilla like. Goodbye people, that’s all, and have a good day. “I have no fear…for everything is already dust. “

Simply for countering one-star reviews made by a certain douchebag for absolutely no reason other than the fact that he wants to do it. Typical troll. Hopefylly this fulfills the word count requirement...

Well I hope the best for this novel, read the manga you said that this novel is about inspired for. I sort of understand how you felt, and I pray for a yandere daughter character if possible. As for why, because I believe you can bring out a perfect yandere daughter character that will leave people afraid, maybe envious, of having a daughter like that.

Dont listen to alvi keep up the good work. All that matters is your happy with your work, write for you. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

It's an okay story but be forewarned it's been dropped............................................................................................ ... ...

Well authorsama novel was always good but dark, nope its abysmaly dark. But this one promise some light, a different feeling, like its a lot of light so... Find your redemption here boys.. I hope itll be as sweeeeeeeeeeet as possible.. 😘 😘 dont dissapoint me. ♥

Give 5 start, because I know this Author will not disappointing his reader. 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Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong👏👏👏

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This sound like the sumary fot a 200+ chaper long hentie where the Mc desendents from the future try to have the mc bang their future mothers, 10/10 would read if it was a dougen

Hi, it's me Gyihhuhu sama my long awaited review is here to write this review I've gone back and reread the chapters again. Grammar and usage of punctuation (5/5): I'm no one to talk about this because I suck at it big time, but seeing you churn out such big chapters without a glaring error talks volumes about your fluency in English, Description(4.5/5): I like how you describe things, but sometimes your description of girls somehow feels bland and you use anime and light novel references a lot while Weaboos like us appreciate that, sometimes you go overboard fill the entire chapter with such things(Tsukasa is the best girl) and harem novel references and manga references due to that some readers may feel alienated. Story(4/5): The story is good but too many girls are introduced in first few chapters to simultaneously characterize them proved hard even for you ( I think) as I felt many of girls in this novel are like copies of each other with little traits touched up by the author to differentiate them. Even more than the girls, I felt like mc friends appeared more real (for a harem story done right, I recommend mushoku Tensei novel which I immensely enjoyed at least the first half of it.) I love mc's nihilistic or pessimistic view was developed because of his father. Flow(4.5/5): I feel like your long describing but discussing about novels or cooking disturbs the flow a little but nothing much. Characters(4.9/5): I liked your characters, I really liked it but certain characters felt like they some more description like the mc's father for example. Even though you say that this is a fun netori story many readers unconvinced because of your pessimistic view that shows through our mc. but very engaging characters I would like how a female species looked like who wouldn't fawn over mc BECAUSE ALL THE IMPORTANT CHARACTERS LOVE INTERESTS. sometimes it feels like it follows all cliches Japanese light novels on bakatsuki but that's just my opinion though so keep going nothing can you from writing the best harem novel in existence.

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I came here from the other novel to u know, check it out. Really enjoyed your previous work, although the story got kinda weird, but still loved to read the newest chapters. Although I’m a little sad that the other novel’s on hiatus, u started writing this so it balances out I guess. Hope u enjoy writing this story and good luck!

I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THIS NOVEL AND I SAW A REVIEW THAT IT HAD BEEN DROPPED SO I'M QUITE SAD IF THIS NOVEL IS AS GOOD AS WHAT THE REVIEWS SAID

Got hooked from the summary and am glad i read it. Kinda like how i stayed away from steins gate and finally watch/read it and it was amazing, this novel brings out the same fun and excitement.