um, what do you mean he didn't say that? It's literally have the word 'said' right there. And what do you mean I put the tone on all of it? I don't remember putting any tone when reading them.

早いです！！

why bother? because the original intention is for him to stay low so other sects don't know about him for at least until that whatever competition it's called.

who is Adam?

duh

what do you expect, sir?

Wait, isn't she already considered as his companion and that they would always be together? or did I miss something?

So I don't know if it's just me or not, but I keep thinking why would the teacher get the tickets? What would she used it for? Would it be explained in the future?

But literally just a few paragraphs before you said it's her fault. So which is it?

I genuinely don't understand him at all. Like that last part for example, he act like he don't want to deal with her, but when she apologized he changes totally. What exactly did he want to do?!

why though?

*are

that's probably the reason why you guys didn't level up fast enough.

not gonna lie, I would do that too if I'm the developer.

so he just jealous

nope, there's something called plot armor remember?

second that.

yup, he's sh*t.

he's a total bull*hit if after saying all that for so many times but in the end still not do it. he's all talk if that's the case.

Instead of directly saying it's a "barcode" you could just say it as "barcode-like birthmark" that way the reader won't directly think about the real word barcode but think like "oh, so it just looks like a barcode".