Daoist1Angel2
Really creative story line! I enjoy the humanity that comes out in the main character when he...well..i guess she...is speaking and telling the story from her point of view. I even giggled at a few spots, which to me, speaks mountains about how relatable the character and their emotions are. I also enjoy the cliffhangers or sneak peaks of, what I assume are upcoming characters or events, that are found near the end of some of the chapters. Very intrigued to find out where this goes!
Great book! A must read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of the best books I have read on this App. The author actually takes time and makes a good and compelling story. The story of reincarnation people use on this app is Inept and unsatisfying. The way you write fixed that problem for me. I also like how there is very little grammer mistakes. Probably less than if I, a native english speaker, had wrote it. Overall I would say that at the time I wrote this, it is one of if not my favorite book on here.
It's a story about a transmigrated male becoming a female angel. It's realistic, believable, and refreshingly lacking of chauvinism. I find it funny and interesting and engaging. My biggest gripe is just inconsistency of updates, but the author was, and is, very upright and forthcoming about it, so I can deal with that.
This story is underrated. I’ve power read this novel over the course of the last three days and I can safely say this is one of the better stories on this site. The world building at the start is really good, but that tappers off some once the MC settles into school but its started back up some in recent chapters. The only weak spot I’ve seen in this story so far is characterization, the MC obviously gets the most screentime but so far they don’t seem to have too many flaws. At one point they got arrogant and was caught braking the rules but we never really saw any characteristics that pointed to that behavior before or since, maybe I just missed them though. The side character have almost no development or screen time outside of brief mentions and a few scenes where they help the MC on occasion. Dispite these flaws thought I still find myself enjoying this story, the world has got a decent foundation and their’s plenty of political mystery left in the plot. I would highly recommend this book.