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It feels like my child nephew describing his super hero game character, oh how great he is, how powerful he is, how everyone adores him, etc, etc. So pure... so innocent.... so simple. The theme is interesting, but the plot is rushed, filled with repetitive descriptions by peanut gallery, and no depth of human nature understanding. I prefer my nephew at least he is cute.
very poor story with no sense. the topper of mech course doesnt get admission in a top college so he picks a rubbish course . just pick the 2nd best college . mc powerup too easily. manufacturing of earts greatest weapon in the hand of one framily. president daughter studying in ordinary college. there is no plot the author is uncreative hence he is forcing fight with mc .. poor novel
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity. And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
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Honest reviews are here.. Firstly, this is an OP MC from the beginning.. Well, it is more accurate if I said this novel is a strong-to-overpower type of novel (Yes, not weak-to-strong).. It is also annoying that they are many corrupted people in this story.. Even from the beginning, MC who is the SMARTEST OR BEST STUDENT got kicked out from the best mecha course of that academy to a genetic course, which is the worst course in the academic DUE TO corrupted jealous people.. Then, his professor is also corrupted by killing EVERYONE, who has huge potential to becoming top genetic humans that can help the human race develop further.. Then, even the city top general is also corrupted, which is trying to eliminate everyone who is stronger than him so he can keep his position in the city.. The author keeps saying that the human race will fall.. Well, how can human growth if many high position is corrupted and keep hindering or eliminate all potential humans who have proven other they already stronger than others at a younger age? It is understandable that the author wants to show the realism of human society in his novel, but this is novel, nobody care if you make more fantasy like the unifying of the human society (a little bit dark kinda fine too) but what the point that EVERY top position rank is corrupted? It is very irritating to read it further, but I still read it until the end.. It just takes a longer time.. Usually, I can finish reading 200 chapters in three days, but this novel does take me almost a week long to just finishing 200 chapters.. Other than corrupted people, everything else is fine.. Recommended? If you like OP MC and have a week of free time, it is highly recommended.. And if you hate OP MC from the beginning, it's not recommended..
Hmm how could I say this, let's start from the top. The writing quality is the best part about this novel yet it still is very boring to read. It doesn't hook you up, neither does it stick in your memory. Story development is very cliché, read the first 20 chapters and you can already compare this plot to hundred other novels. Character Design... I don't even think it exists, moreover the first chapter says it all. The World Background too is normal and yeah... cliché WHICH IS NOT BAD, HOWEVER with the story development being this bad, it automatically makes the World Building bad as well. All in all, just because anybody can think of a random story, doesn't mean they have to write one. However, seeing how many Golden Tickets this novel received, either these people are special or the novel gets a major boost later on.
honestly idk what to say, the overall plot so far is okay, but I question so many things that happen in the book that just doesnt follow human common sense. Does the MC not feel even a littke aggrieved? He just sucks it in and allows the MC plot armor to surround him, like??? And the scenes with Callie?? I dont get it. You'd say she has a strong background and the Locke family cant anger the president but the president cant offend the Locke Family over a genius? Okay, understandable have a nice day