Reviews of After 2nd Adam

Author here. Self criticism time. Firstly, I want to thank my dear friends I threa- ahem, asked for supporting. Betül, Beyza, Buğday, Rüm... Love you all. Secondly, I want to say that the where I stand is so far from the point I intended. I have to improve my writing quality. For a non-native English speaker, I spend most of my time to worry about writing quality and it affects update frequency. The more time I spend writing, the lower the word count... I'm trying to get over this. I hope that I am able to introduce the world inside my head.

I'm gonna rate five stars for support but I'm going to be blunt here. (I hope you dont mind). For the pros, I can commend the author when he thought of the world building regarding the shape shifters, vampires and the witches. They have their own spin that the author had implemented. This story gave me a mystery-fantasy vibes and it is still early to judge where this is going. I actually like the beginning, it had a thrilling and psychological vibe about morality when the children were being genetically modified. Now for the cons. Let's start with the writing quality, in the first part it was kinda lacking in detail that some scenes are not flowing nicely. . I think the first part was the most confusing one, since it began on some lab and then to a space ship then to earth. Since not to mention there was barely any detail on the settings before transition. It was slightly uncomfrtoable for me. But as the chapters went on I can see some improvement which is good. But I think the author needs to work on some of the transitions, since some were too abrupt and I had to reread again to check since the settings seemed to have changed. Also they were frequently done and its sometimes bad since it can destroy the flow. The main character which is jason is an investigator I assume, though his character is still underwhelming and he had not shown personality beyond his work but there are still plenty of time to devlop. His interactions with the character is just okay but for now he is just staring on the sidelines. Also Im not sure if I missed it but Im not sure what is the role of the MC, is he a police task force or a private investigator? I could not see any of his goals or drive. This may be my personal opinion but I think the synopsis needs some work. Since most of the time, the readers who would look at the synopsis would be curious about the MC and what will happen to him in that story. But in the synopsis it was just the background and history and I think people may not care about it. I think it would be better if the mc's goal or drive were written there, or that he would he have a system that would make him superior to the others. But overall good work and dont take this as 100% fact this is just my opinion.

The author exhibits extraordinary abilities to take us to a time where imagination runs wild, where anything could be possible. Where organs can be replaced with machinery, to make attain immortality! It's a very unconventional read and just 2 chapters in, I want to read ahead and see what happens next! Good work, author.

Way above your average web novel. The writing quality is okay, with few grammar errors but it's completely understandable. Way above what one gets to see here. The stablity I don't care as someone who likes quality over quanitity. The story development is cool, few infodumps but it flows well. I don't have a complaints there. Not much to say about characters as I would like to scan more befroe judging that. What I have seen is okay. And the world background is described well. Actually I would say that is the best part among what I read. Overall, it's a good story. I binged and really fast so take my review with a grain of salt :)

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I wrote this review after reading the second chapter. Interesting concept, could use a little more polish with setting the scene and character interactions. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!

I give five stars to all. the story hasn't started yet, and the book is burning my library. I never thought this would be such bombing. it's way too awesome. I got crazy haaaa phew, I really loved it. the chapter explained the picture changes in a very smooth way in my head. it's very easy to understand. Keep up the strong talent and give your best sort. go for it author!!!!!