Yup they talked about that
Hi! I’ve read every comment you have made since yesterday and was waiting for you to read last chapter. I hope you enjoyed reading, and I can’t answer this in order not to give spoilers :(
I was trying to design a very few but complicated skills, like desires of heart, instead of too many skills serving a single purpose, such as night vision. I don’t like system novels with hard to read interfaces (is this right word?) so trying to avoide that. Thanks for the stones btw.
Firstly, thanks for your comments. Secondly, literally 1400 words about buying shoes and 600 words for the rest of the episode. Lastly, character development needs time, give her time. No spoiler, but the title of the second volume is ''No Longer Human''. Things get interesting there.
I use quotes if someone speaks out loud, and apostrophe if they're only thinking
Hi! Thanks for your time. The issue that I am trying to develop the most right now is the place descriptions, actions and as you said, transitions. I am happy to hear that I developed. As for the MC, I don't know how successful I can be, but there are so many chapters I need to write to finish introducing him. I guess it will not help me or the reader to explain the incomprehensibility about him now and here. Synopsis... I have no idea what I can do about it. I need to think about it a little bit. Thanks for review again.
I am writing this review after reading chapter 12. I have to admit that this novel is very different from its counterparts. History and romance are not my first preference when I want to read something, but this story is interesting.
Author here. Self criticism time. Firstly, I want to thank my dear friends I threa- ahem, asked for supporting. Betül, Beyza, Buğday, Rüm... Love you all. Secondly, I want to say that the where I stand is so far from the point I intended. I have to improve my writing quality. For a non-native English speaker, I spend most of my time to worry about writing quality and it affects update frequency. The more time I spend writing, the lower the word count... I'm trying to get over this. I hope that I am able to introduce the world inside my head.
Well, not gonna lie, this novel made me laugh. I really doesn't like main character so I hope he suffer more. I don't care how hard things he went through raping and cheating are unacceptable. Those girls fell for him, please stop!! Ugh! To be serious, I am not a critic and don't know how to give a proper review. Just, I wish you luck and happy writings dear author. This novel is not bad at all. You got me at Madara Uchiha.
Novels with systems and rankings always make my interest aroused and start to confuse me after a while. You know, if I take a few weeks off reading; techniques, abilities, missions etc. give me a headache to remember. Author spends time and effort to create a world and naturally knows those things. However for us, poor readers, needs you to keep it simple as an advice if you let me give one. Great job author.