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Lolth

Lolth

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2018-05-02 JoinedTurkey
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  • Lolth
    Lolth2d
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    I want her to have horns... oh wait- I’m writing this so I can give her horns!!! Maybe~~

    Ch 53 Deal
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    How to be a Succubus
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  • Lolth
    Lolth4d
    Replied to Shaades71_Ps4

    Hi! Me author! Second language English not speak well :( thank you warning . . Seriously, please warn me in the comments, I’ll edit when I have time.

    Ch 18 Hiring Guards
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  • Lolth
    Lolth4d
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    Nice questions that supposed to be already answered but instead will be answered since it’s 1 a.m and the chapter isn’t done yet......

    Ch 52 Being Summoned
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  • Lolth
    Lolth6d
    Replied to Weezyf

    I, too, am waiting for smut

    Ch 49 A Breath
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  • Lolth
    Lolth6d
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    You read 🥺

    Ch 49 A Breath
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  • Lolth
    Lolth18d
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    Yup they talked about that

    ''It's weird that the light still hasn't left you. I've never seen a demon specializing in the light element before,'' The fox said.
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  • Lolth
    Lolth22d
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    Hi! I’ve read every comment you have made since yesterday and was waiting for you to read last chapter. I hope you enjoyed reading, and I can’t answer this in order not to give spoilers :(

    ''I don't know. I only carry some memories of the nine-tailed fox and she didn't have to. She was receiving a level-up quest once in every ten levels. But she is a noble member of the clan, with a natural succubus core. She was born with the core, she didn't make a deal for it unlike you,'' the fox said.
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  • Lolth
    Lolth24d
    Replied to Weezyf

    I was trying to design a very few but complicated skills, like desires of heart, instead of too many skills serving a single purpose, such as night vision. I don’t like system novels with hard to read interfaces (is this right word?) so trying to avoide that. Thanks for the stones btw.

    Ch 19 Being Blessed With Light
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  • Lolth
    Lolth24d
    Replied to Weezyf

    Who knows?

    Ch 19 Being Blessed With Light
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  • Lolth
    Lolth30d
    Replied to Weezyf

    Firstly, thanks for your comments. Secondly, literally 1400 words about buying shoes and 600 words for the rest of the episode. Lastly, character development needs time, give her time. No spoiler, but the title of the second volume is ''No Longer Human''. Things get interesting there.

    Ch 10 Conquering World in Right Shoes
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  • Lolth
    Lolth30d
    Replied to Weezyf

    Oh thanks! I’m not native english speaker so please warn me when you think it’s needed

    Ch 1 Do You Want Revenge?
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  • Lolth
    Lolth1mth
    Replied to Magic_

    I use quotes if someone speaks out loud, and apostrophe if they're only thinking

    He turned his head to check the silver light that caught his attention. 'What? Have I started daydreaming now? There's no way the moon could touch the sea, right? Is there?' When he finally could take his eyes from the sea and look at the road, the first thing he noticed was that he was late to hit the brakes.
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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Replied to HotRedFlaming

    Hi! Thanks for your time. The issue that I am trying to develop the most right now is the place descriptions, actions and as you said, transitions. I am happy to hear that I developed. As for the MC, I don't know how successful I can be, but there are so many chapters I need to write to finish introducing him. I guess it will not help me or the reader to explain the incomprehensibility about him now and here. Synopsis... I have no idea what I can do about it. I need to think about it a little bit. Thanks for review again.

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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Posted

    I am writing this review after reading chapter 12. I have to admit that this novel is very different from its counterparts. History and romance are not my first preference when I want to read something, but this story is interesting.

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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Posted

    Author here. Self criticism time. Firstly, I want to thank my dear friends I threa- ahem, asked for supporting. Betül, Beyza, Buğday, Rüm... Love you all. Secondly, I want to say that the where I stand is so far from the point I intended. I have to improve my writing quality. For a non-native English speaker, I spend most of my time to worry about writing quality and it affects update frequency. The more time I spend writing, the lower the word count... I'm trying to get over this. I hope that I am able to introduce the world inside my head.

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    After 2nd Adam
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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Posted

    Well, not gonna lie, this novel made me laugh. I really doesn't like main character so I hope he suffer more. I don't care how hard things he went through raping and cheating are unacceptable. Those girls fell for him, please stop!! Ugh! To be serious, I am not a critic and don't know how to give a proper review. Just, I wish you luck and happy writings dear author. This novel is not bad at all. You got me at Madara Uchiha.

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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Commented

    Okaay. This is not enough. Not a bad enough ending for what he was meant to do. I hope he dies in a ditch again and again.

    Ch 1 Died Because Of A Boner
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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Replied to BRPever

    Thank you so much!

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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Replied to Bettsuru

    I hope that you liked my novel! Çok sevindim okumana ben sana çeviririm istersen <3

    Ch 1 Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow
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  • Lolth
    Lolth2mth
    Posted

    Novels with systems and rankings always make my interest aroused and start to confuse me after a while. You know, if I take a few weeks off reading; techniques, abilities, missions etc. give me a headache to remember. Author spends time and effort to create a world and naturally knows those things. However for us, poor readers, needs you to keep it simple as an advice if you let me give one. Great job author.

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