Review Detail of Lolth in After 2nd Adam

Author here. Self criticism time. Firstly, I want to thank my dear friends I threa- ahem, asked for supporting. Betül, Beyza, Buğday, Rüm... Love you all. Secondly, I want to say that the where I stand is so far from the point I intended. I have to improve my writing quality. For a non-native English speaker, I spend most of my time to worry about writing quality and it affects update frequency. The more time I spend writing, the lower the word count... I'm trying to get over this. I hope that I am able to introduce the world inside my head.