Pixie_Auri
I got the feeling of cinderella in this story, no? The beginning of the story was funny, I like the girl. Not many novels put notice on aerialists so I appreciate that you shed light on it. There were some grammatical mistakes, but we all make mistakes. What matters is that the grammatical errors didn't interrupt my reading. I need more of this story, like I'm being dead serious. Keep up the good work!
I love the characters that have emotion and seem human. Incredibly so. Not only does each character have their own quirks, emotional state, and manner of speaking and acting, but they also interact with each person depending on who they are to that character. Masterfully built storyline, wonderful characters, and an enthralling novel.
Thank you author for this story. i enjoyed reading your work. Looking forward to learn more about Kiara and her mysterious background. Her talent and hidden past would be something that reader look foward to find out more. Her initial reaction and the way she treatS Chris vs. her taking up Chris offer to go on a holiday and getting to know him from that point - nicely written. Keep yp the good work!
This here is a strong story. The writing quality is superb, and the chapters are coming hard and fast. The characters are what really make this story, Kiara especially and the colorful cast that surround her side of things. There is such natural humor that comes out of their very relatable personalities. Love the differences between the two main characters and there's a lot to explore in this story that I can't wait to see. Keep up the good work!