Reviews of A Rift Between Time and Space

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The idea is amazing and words are good. Only one chapter is released, so I can't tell much. But it's good. Keep writing!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Writing quality: I see no problem except some minor teeny tiny ones but that can be improved with time. story development: 5/5 No complains. the story progress is neither too fast nor too slow. character design: The MC is really amazing and the way he is described is also really good.😊 Update stability: check😁 world background: It has also been done nicely.Welp adding few elements later might not be a problem. overall good read. Check it out people😊

The story and world is really interesting. It makes me want to read more. The downside is the updates are not daily and the writing quality is not that good at the beginning. But in this last point, the author improves in each chapter. It will be a great novel when the author's potential is fully unleashed :)

the story is creative and very interesting lots of readers will reread this again if this story will be completed already. I wanna read more also, so I'm going to wait for the next chapters😎

This novel is phenomenal. From the very first line, the author twists their words around you like a knife plunged in the gut to tell an atmospheric tale. With minimal grammatical errors, I left all constructive commentary within the novel itself. Reading this showstopping plotline, I felt the author and story evolving. Some of the improvement points I had disappeared as the writer showed their skills augmenting chapter by chapterz Our main character, Flame, must be loved and cherished. I can’t wait for more of this novel. Great work, author! Keep rising!!

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! Congrats and Kudos!

The world-building is interesting, and the start of the story is also interesting. Although there was something missing in the story. The plot is great so far, so as the character design. (Flame is my favorite character). And the writing quality, I must say it is awesome.

Your story is good. And plots are getting interesting. I would like u to suggest you to correct some grammatic mistakes and try to create plots more interesting. Overall keep it up author and best of luck....[img=recommend]

An interesting concept of having the main character be a deaf assassin. I do see a few things that jump out at me. First: Although deaf, deaf people are not quiet. They'll make noises without realizing that they do it. So I assuming the MC gets over this by training. Which brings me to my second point: I would think that the deaf assassin has trained in the art of reading lips. This would be extremely useful for him as to gather information. I am, however, interested in where this story goes and wish the author good luck!