Review Detail of Bird_Of_Paradise in A Rift Between Time and Space

Writing quality: I see no problem except some minor teeny tiny ones but that can be improved with time. story development: 5/5 No complains. the story progress is neither too fast nor too slow. character design: The MC is really amazing and the way he is described is also really good.😊 Update stability: check😁 world background: It has also been done nicely.Welp adding few elements later might not be a problem. overall good read. Check it out people😊