webnovel

A perfect world: BREAK

A teenager who just turned 18 and just days ago got his diploma is signing up for the hero program known as Hero Society. The Hero Society is the most famous hero institution in the world, having thousands of people try to sign up and join. This teenager (named Daniel) passes all exams with flying colors and manages to join as one of the most skilled in his class. Daniel trains with his class and the teachers for weeks. After these weeks of training, Daniel finally gets to go out on the field. While scouting, Daniel notices someone getting robbed. Daniel hurried to help make it just in time. He fights the villain, but having a lack of control over his abilities kills the man. Daniel goes to court. He gets released after many eyewitnesses and cameras back him up. about three weeks after court, Daniel gets captured by a villain who claims to be the brother of the person he killed. After Weeks of the worst torturing known to man whipping, cutting, beating, tearing out finger and toe nails, pouring exetremly hot water on him, taking a spoon to his eye and pulling it out, and much more, finally someone finds him and helps him escape. while in the hospital, Daniel gets a vision about a world without heroes or villains. This world was so perfect, but the one thing that he noticed the most about the vision was that he was the one leading this perfect world. Daniel made up his mind that day since heroes couldn't save anyone, and villains kept hurting people he decided. "it's time for a change." ******************************************** I will be uploading a chapter 6 times a week. Also, the book cover is not of my making. If you are the maker and do not want it on there, do tell. ******************************************** Sorry for the lack of updates. Recently, I have lacked the interest to update the book. It's not because of people reading. Actually, this book has grown so much that it's incredible. I just have lost interest in making the book because it takes up two-three hours of my day. Currently, I'm a sophomore in high school, and I just lack time to make the book. I will continue to make the book, but it won't be as much as before.

FG_Frost · Action
Not enough ratings
25 Chs

The first member

Walking into the living room, I see Reckoning laying down on the couch, typing away at her laptop.

Reckoning moved in with me since we are going to be working together now. Since then, she's been a real help.

"I believe I found someone." Reckoning says.

"Who?" I ask

"Her name is Katelyn Bruckner. She has the ability to amplify her superhuman capabilities, like strength, speed, durability, endurance, and our minor healing factor. How much she can amplify it is unknown, but she is incredibly strong, here look at her pro talent card."

A pro talent card is like the talent card I got before, but it is for people who have developed their ability further or their physical prowess. You can get a talent or pro talent level card by going to the talent Embassy.

Reckoning points at her laptop, showing me the pro talent card.

Pro talent card for:

Katelyn Bruckner

Strength: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○

Speed: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○

Durability: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○

Endurance: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○

ability: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○

control: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ●

iq: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ● ● ●

Tactical thinking: ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ● ●

Pro talent level: S

"Wow." I say in astonishment.

"Yeah. So is that what you are looking for?" Reckoning asks.

"Yes, perfect, but will she want to join us?"

"From my research, she is lost in life, or at least it seems that way. From what I learned, she joined a group that stole from random people. After getting into a fight with a hero. She was captured. While in prison, she decided she wanted to do good in the world. When she got out of prison, she joined a group that went around helping people who were injured from hero and villain fights. Unfortunately for Katelyn, she got recognized and got disbanded from the group. Not only that, but while she was sleeping on a bench, she got pelted with rocks and bricks. Since then, she roams around on the streets, not really going anywhere."

"She needs help."

"Indeed. Daniel."

Immediately, I think back to the visions. Daniel is not my givin name at birth. Michael is the name my mother gave me when I was born, but afterward, she changed both my first and last name to Daniel Rodway. I don't know why, but she did.

"I'll be heading out then." I say.

I quickly put on my clothes and mask, then walk out the door.

"She was last reported on the east side of town. You already know that place well." Reckoning says.

She makes me put this stupid earpiece in all the time. In this circumstance, I'm glad, though, because I had no clue where to start.

About 15 minutes into walking my way there, I noticed three people surrounding a woman.

one of them punch her, knocking her to the ground. Considering how hard the punch was, I would say that he was a superhuman. Looking at her face, I see no blood nor any damage at all.

The man who punched her yells, "You think you are so powerful because you gang up on the weak, huh!"

Immediately, I dash towards where they are, running as fast as possible.

Reaching them, I grab the necks of the other two who did nothing.

"Break." I say in a menacing voice.

There heads splat, blood spurting everywhere. The man who punched the women slowly backs off. Blood slowly drips down his clothes and face.

"You- you bastard!" The man screams.

He holds up a palm, aiming it at me. A ball of smoke shoots out, coming straight towards me, I quickly lift my hand up, aiming it at the ball. The second the ball comes into contact with my hand, it shatters, and smoke flies around us. I dash towards where he last was. I lift out my hand, waiting for it to make contact, the millisecond it does, splat.

Blood drips down my clothes, I watch some blood drip off my hands when I notice a voice.

"Why?"

I turn my head to the left to see the woman smothered in blood, her eyes looking straight at me.

"Why would you kill them?" She asks

"Because I'm looking for someone, and I have a suspicion it might be you. Would your name happen to be Katelyn Bruckner?" I ask.

"Why would you be looking for me? I'm useless, I have no purpose."

"You're wrong. You do have a purpose. I have seen your pro talent card. You are an incredible fighter. That's your purpose."

"No. No. No. I don't want to hurt anyone."

"You're wrong Katelyn, you do want to hurt people. This world is against you. They throw rocks and bricks at you, and they beat you. Are you going to accept such a life?"

"It's my punishment."

"Your punishment, huh? Well, it ends right here."

"What do you mean."

I reach my hand over to her, offering to help her up.

"Join me, Katelyn. I will create a world of peace and happiness. A world where you can help people, as many as you want, and not get shamed for it." I say.

"How do I know you're not going to just use me." She says.

"I promise on all my dreams that I will make this happen. Help me, Katelyn. Don't waste your life away roaming the streets. That ain't helping people, Katelyn, but if you help me, then I promise you'll help millions, if not billions."

She slowly reaches for my hand, gripping it tightly and pulling herself up.

"Okay, I'll help you." She answers.

"Thank you." I say

Afterward, I quickly led her to my house, allowing her to make herself at home. She runs to the shower.

"What's all the blood?" Reckoning asks.

"Some people recognized her. They just started to beat her when I got there. it didn't last too long afterward." I answer.

"Is she staying here?"

"Of course."

"Did you manage to convince her?"

"Lisson, don't start freaking out on me, I wouldn't have brought her here if she dint decided to join, okay."

"Okay. Okay. Fair point."

After a while, Katelyn walks out of the bathroom, wearing clothes that Reckoning gave her.

I take this moment to assess her qualities. She has blond hair that drops down to her chin and a bad scar that starts at the chin and curves towards her left eye, stopping just below the eye. She has some really deep brown eyes that would give any normal man the shivers.

She's incredibly athletic looking and is about the same height as me, 6,2.

"I never cought either of your names." Katelyn asks.

"I'm Reckoning." Reckoning answers.

"I'm Akuji." I answer.

"And the name of this group?" Katelyn asks.

Me and Reckoning say, "Perfect World." At the same time.

hello, everyone. I just wanted to ask a small favor. if you guys could leave a comment telling me what I need to work on or if I'm doing just fine, that would be absolutely amazing. I take everything very seriously, so I will take your comment into major consideration. I just want this series to be something because I love the story, and I think a lot of other people would to, but if I write something bad or there's something about how I write that you don't like tell me pls so I can fix it.

FG_Frostcreators' thoughts