A Immortals Eden (ch.1)

A immortals Eden

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Planet earth was evolving fatser than what anyone could imagine, mysterious figures or what most people call it "Edens" statred appearing everywhere.

No one knows the "true" orgins of them, but people do know how they're created.

Edens are mainly created from anyone's emotion, desires, ideas, conflicts and/or fears.

It's also known that Edens "bond" or forcibly become one with the human it desires to be with, this creates many problems within the world due to the edens potentially having strong abilities; a good amount of people use edens to abuse power.

Edens are mostly with or around men because of the strong emotions they posses.

Jäger is a male teen who's 15 years of age, 5'11 and 141 pounds with ocean blue eyes, naturally long white hair with naturally white eyelashes.

Jäger can see certain Edens that no one else can see, he can also communicate with them.

He's is also only person who can communicate with an Eden that shows no interest in a person or isn't fully bonded with them, and he can communicate with edens that are fully bonded with others.

Jäger feels like his life isn't worth living, so he tried to end his life.

But that's when a mysterious Eden appeared?

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Chapter 1: A immortals Eden

𝘐𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘪𝘥𝘥𝘭𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘢 𝘸𝘢𝘳 𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘯 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘺 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘣𝘳𝘰𝘬𝘦𝘯 𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘢𝘭 𝘴𝘤𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘴 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦, 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘶𝘪𝘭𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴, 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘥 𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘴, with 𝘥𝘦𝘤𝘢𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘳𝘦𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘴

*drip drip*

Jäger looks down at his feet, he closed his eyes and tears just kept coming out uncontrollably; he said to myself "why am I giving my time to people to people who don't even care for me, this whole world is against me".

That's when unknown Eden walked up to Jäger, he had no mouth, had feet that were like a jacanas Talons, his body was shaped like a stickman but he also had a hole in the middle of his chest.

When the Eden walked up to Jäger he looked at his arms and started to cry more, his cries had no noise but you can clearly see that his tears were coming out; his eyes looked very hollow but it also looked like a void.

Jäger said "Why do you keep looking at my arms? Stop it now. I see your kind everywhere it drives me crazy, normal people see you guys when you're close to them but I see you guys no matter the distances it, scares me."

Jäger stood up, he was on a abandoned bridge, at the bottom there was no water, no life, or even a single noise under that bridge.

He said to himself "I don't care if I live or die, but i'm just tired of living".

The unknown Eden looked up at Jäger and cried even more, and his chest hole started pouring out a black tar substance; the eden used his toothpic like fingers to write something out of the tar that came out from it's chest.

He wrote "if you're by yourself, do you call it freedom? Or loneliness?"

Jäger stood still and thought about it, he replied "I call it loneliness, the only way i'll ever be free if I jump from this bridge; death will bring me freedom."

The unknown Eden started crying even more, he kept looking at Jägers arms.

Jäger looked at the unknown Eden and said to him "I'm not sure why you're crying, but I hope you're not crying over me, it would be better if you just forgot about me".

At first Jäger was hesitant to jump off the bridge, he was scared about the pain that will come with the fall; but he knew the pain of living was the worse pain he could ever experience.

*BOOM*

He jumped off the bridge with a smile on his face.

his body hit the ground very hard, his bones poked out if his body, and his limbs were mangled and torn apart.

It started to rain and thunder, the rain just kept pouring harder and harder; puddles started to appear around him, and the blood from his mangled body started to accumulate in the puddle making it red.

The unknown Eden stopped crying, and looked at Jägers dead body; he walked up to the bridge and jumped off the in the same spot that eden did and landed right next to him with no damage dealt to the body.

*SNAP*

Jäger opened his eyes, he made a frowny yet slightly smiley facial expression, with tears in his eyes he said to himself "Why the hell am I still alive"; he turned his head to the left and saw the unknown Eden with tears in his eyes as well.

The unknown Edens chest started to leak out black tar like substance again, he used his toothpick looking fingers yet again to write something with the black substance.

He wrote on the wet floor "Use your pain as a stepping stone to wisdom not your demise."

Jäger yelled out "WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO ME", he started to tear up even more and said "please don't tell me you forcibly bonded with me, is your power doing this? Why is there absolutely no damage on my body? WHY AM STILL I ALIVE?"

The unknown Eden had no response.

Jäger without hesitation and unexpectedly took a long piece of metal scrap and stabbed his throat with it, he started to cry in pain as he started to uncontrollably gargle the blood that came from his the throat, he was in pure agony; blood started pouring out of his throat as he bled to death.

*SNAP*

He was alive again, Jäger realized everytime he woke up from death there was snapping noise that came with it, he said to himself "I know that I died, I see my blood everywhere, I even see the puddles of my blood from when I jumped off the bridge; so how am I still ALIVE?"

Jäger slowly turned his head to the unknown Eden.

He realized that the Eden had to of bonded with him, there's no other explanation for what's happening to him aside from that, he thought to himself "This has to be his power, I just can't figure it out".

five minutes have passed, Jäger is looking at his own blood that came from his past death and that's when he realized what the power was potentially; he started to tear up again as he opened his mouth, he said with a trembling voice "Hey, Eden creature, did you just give me immortality?"

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*To be continued*

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