M_Lexi
This is good and it has so much potential!! I have to admit that I'm always in for a BL novel, be it good or not so good I always give it a try but this novel it's different. It has an excellent writing Quality. there's no difference from paid authors novels like 'release that witch' from yours. the world background and the way you describe it it's so good, the MC is lovable and in all truth this is addictive and it gives me life. Thanks for creating this. You're doing amazing sweetie <3
This is a thrilling novel and I would recommend this to any person who enjoys fantasy novels! Not only is it a fantasy novel but it is definitely unique!! I personally have read many novels based around cultivation but never have I read one as creative as this, it really takes the character development of the MC in a whole different way. Also, not only the development but the actual title and storyline of the MC I have never even heard of!!! This personally is probably the best fantasy novel I have read yet and I hope to see more of it in the future!!!!!!
I'm not completely caught up with this story but I still really want to leave a review on this. 1. The concept for this story was unpredictable, and in even now, it still is. I'm pretty good at guessing endings and storylines, but this whole story threw me for a very satisfying loop. 2. I love the characters, I really do and I know that I can't really make a judgment on the characters right now but I feel like Mao Lu's personality is beyond perfect, as much as I love a strong MC Mao Lu is a literal saint. His character type is that of a Mary Sue in a lot of aspects, and throughout the story, he just seems to keep getting more perfect. Find a possible thing that you could easily bring to peoples attention slowly. Show us that Mao Lu is still haunted by the day his mother died, show that in any way you can. Make us more aware of the way his past experiences have affected his smallest actions and mindset. Because him being this close to perfect makes him a bit of a flat character. But Mao Lu is a really well-built character and with some small tweaks, I think you'll have a character with quite a bit of depth. 3. I feel like Mao Lu has endless luck right now, he seems to be getting away with everything he does and earning more and more attention. Him experiencing true, painful, sickening failure will add more to this story add more anticipation for people to read this story. 4 THIS HAS BEEN MY LIFESAVER FOR THE PAST WEEK AND IT'S MY LIFESAVER FOR NEXT WEEK, THANK YOU SO MUCH BECAUSE I WAS LOOKING FOR SOME SATISFYING BL.
I really like this novel because it both of the main characters are independent but still able to support each other without having 1 of them hiding behind the other's back. It's a little bit disappointing that the chapter updates aren't daily but I can understand the author being busy in real life. I really recommend this book for those wanting to read a bl novel where the main couple is equal in their relationship.
This is an amazingly addictive story that is so new a different from any I have read before! It’s very well written and I get so absorbed when I’m reading, I love the main character and mail leads interactions and am now a die hard supporter of this story! Well done to the Author for creating such an awesome price of written!