Review Detail of Yananad in A Gatekeeper and The Celestial Sovereign

I'm not completely caught up with this story but I still really want to leave a review on this. 1. The concept for this story was unpredictable, and in even now, it still is. I'm pretty good at guessing endings and storylines, but this whole story threw me for a very satisfying loop. 2. I love the characters, I really do and I know that I can't really make a judgment on the characters right now but I feel like Mao Lu's personality is beyond perfect, as much as I love a strong MC Mao Lu is a literal saint. His character type is that of a Mary Sue in a lot of aspects, and throughout the story, he just seems to keep getting more perfect. Find a possible thing that you could easily bring to peoples attention slowly. Show us that Mao Lu is still haunted by the day his mother died, show that in any way you can. Make us more aware of the way his past experiences have affected his smallest actions and mindset. Because him being this close to perfect makes him a bit of a flat character. But Mao Lu is a really well-built character and with some small tweaks, I think you'll have a character with quite a bit of depth. 3. I feel like Mao Lu has endless luck right now, he seems to be getting away with everything he does and earning more and more attention. Him experiencing true, painful, sickening failure will add more to this story add more anticipation for people to read this story. 4 THIS HAS BEEN MY LIFESAVER FOR THE PAST WEEK AND IT'S MY LIFESAVER FOR NEXT WEEK, THANK YOU SO MUCH BECAUSE I WAS LOOKING FOR SOME SATISFYING BL.