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A Bride's Choosing

A woman must choose between two being's one good and one evil. Her choice will change her eternal destiny forever. Delivering or Condemning her soul what will she choose?

Joshua_Khan_2290 · Fantasy
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15 Chs

Chapter 3: The Tempter's Charm

Christiana found herself waking in the gentle moonlight, the memory of her sacred moments with Jesus still fresh in her heart. However, a chill ran down her spine as she sensed a dark presence lurking near. Peering through her window, she saw a shadowy figure gazing up at her chambers. At first, she took it for a wandering spirit, but something about its aura unsettled her. She pulled back, hugging her cloak tight.

As if responding to her worries, a familiar soft voice sounded within: "Fear not, dear one. No darkness can overcome the light you've found." Heart strengthening, Christiana looked again and gasped.

The shadow was no longer alone. Beside it stood a dazzling figure, features obscured but stance emanating calm. As the two presences engaged, the shadow seemed agitated but ultimately slipped reluctantly away under the stranger's watch.

Breathless, wondering at this new guardian, Christiana gave thanks for the divine protection of angels. Clutching this reassurance, she drifted once more into blissful dreams of her waiting bridegroom, Satan's schemes now thwarted under heaven's watchful eye. Christiana slowly opened her eyes, momentarily forgetting where she was. A breathtaking stranger sat beside her, smiling gently.

"Forgive me for disturbing your rest, fair one," he said. "I saw you troubled and wished only to provide comfort."

Though she was immediately wary of this stranger in her chambers, his calming demeanor disarmed her. "Thank you for your kindness," she replied hesitantly.

"One as radiant as yourself should never know distress. Might I ask what plagues your dreams?" His question, framed as an innocent concern, sowed the first seeds of unease in Christiana's heart. Prudence told her to turn him away, yet curiosity held her tongue.

"I dreamed of shadows, where once shone light," she answered vaguely. The stranger tilted his head thoughtfully. "Darkness often arises uninvited, sowing needless fear. But day always follows night. Perhaps there are pleasures night also conceals that enlighten in their own way."

His silky words hinted at temptation, though subtle. Christiana's guard rose, yet still she listened, intrigued by this dazzling Tempter's alluring promise. Christiana's eyes widened, shocked yet captivated, as the stranger snapped his fingers. Suddenly they stood atop a grand staircase, gilded halls spreading as far as the eye could see.

"All this can be yours," the dazzling stranger said with a flourish. "Every desire is fulfilled, and power over all lies within these walls. No more loneliness or uncertainty; only joy and exultation forever."

His illusions were crafted well to spark the deepest longings. For a fleeting moment, Christiana imagined herself as the queen of this palace. But memories of simpler truths slowly resurfaced—gentle whispers in the garden, healing words by the stream.

Her momentary wonder turned to confusion. "This...cannot be real," she breathed. "And what price does such grandeur demand of its keeper?"

A smile ghosted the stranger's lips. "You need only accept what is freely offered, with no strings attached. Why cling to childish fancies when reality can be so much sweeter?"

His silky, convincing webs in Christiana's mind threatened to fade. But still, a small voice whispered, Is this glittering place truly better than what was promised? Christiana shook her head, hoping to clear the fog seeping into her thoughts. "I cannot deny such grandeur appeals to vanity," she admitted. "But give me a reason why I should choose fleeting pleasures over an eternal promise."

The stranger's features softened into a sympathetic smile. "Eternity seems like such a long time to spend in want, does it not? I offer to fulfill the desires of the body as well as the spirit." He lifted a hand to her cheek, his gaze flickering with promises beyond words.

Though revulsion rose in her spirit, lingering curiosity proved her undoing. For a breathless moment, Christiana wondered at carnal fulfillment and the trappings of a queen, then jerked away in horror.

"You tempt me to corruption," she cried. "My worth isn't defined by base cravings or appeal to silk tongues! I was promised purpose, joy, and unconditional love—gifts no gilded cage could offer."

The stranger's pleasing mien finally cracked to reveal wrath beneath. "So you choose a life of self-denial and sacrifice? Foolish girl. Your bridegroom will only see you as another lost soul to redeem—nothing more special than the lowliest beggar."

His last words struck too close to Christiana's secret vulnerabilities. But she set her jaw against the whispering doubts, having glimpsed darkness in the false light's radiant shine. Her choice remained unchanged. Christiana steadied her resolve as the stranger's charming mien crumbled into wrath. With a cold smile and mocking bow, he turned on his heel, the gilded halls falling away into shadow.

"This is not the end, little dove. I will pluck your pretty feathers one by one until all that's left is an empty shell for my keeping."

His parting threat echoed ominously through the gloom. Christiana sank to her knees, drained yet restless from the encounter. She breathed a prayer for protection and clarity, seeking refuge in memories of her Savior's enduring promises.

Though doubt and confusion remained, recalling Jesus' loving words began mending cracks in her faith. She clung to hope that His light would ultimately prevail against the sleek deceptions woven this night. When dawn rose, Christiana greeted its rays with renewed determination to stay anchored in truth, despite the Tempter's efforts to lead her adrift with webs of guile. Her choice was made, and by God's grace, she would not waiver, come what may.

"The devil abhors light and truth because these remove the ground of his working."

- Watchman Nee

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