Journey of Draconis

𝕐𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕕𝕖𝕕𝕚𝕔𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕝𝕠𝕣𝕖 𝕚𝕤 𝕘𝕖𝕟𝕦𝕚𝕟𝕖𝕝𝕪 𝕚𝕟𝕤𝕡𝕚𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘. 𝔼𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕕𝕖𝕥𝕒𝕚𝕝 𝕗𝕖𝕖𝕝𝕤 𝕚𝕟𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟𝕒𝕝 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕒𝕕𝕕𝕤 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕣𝕚𝕔𝕙𝕟𝕖𝕤𝕤 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕖𝕟𝕧𝕚𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥. 𝕀 𝕗𝕖𝕖𝕝 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕀 𝕔𝕠𝕦𝕝𝕕 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕣𝕤 𝕛𝕦𝕤𝕥 𝕖𝕩𝕡𝕝𝕠𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕖𝕥𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕪𝕠𝕦'𝕧𝕖 𝕓𝕦𝕚𝕝𝕥. 𝕀 𝕨𝕒𝕟𝕥 𝕥𝕠 𝕘𝕚𝕧𝕖 𝕒 𝕙𝕦𝕘𝕖 𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕥-𝕠𝕦𝕥 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕓𝕣𝕚𝕝𝕝𝕚𝕒𝕟𝕥 𝕔𝕙𝕒𝕡𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕛𝕦𝕤𝕥 𝕣𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕒𝕤𝕖𝕕! 𝕀𝕥 𝕨𝕒𝕤 𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕀 𝕙𝕠𝕡𝕖𝕕 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖. 𝕐𝕠𝕦 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕒 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕥𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕘. 𝔹𝕣𝕒𝕧𝕠!"

Overall this was pretty decent, even if it had some flaws. I like how it jumps right into the action and immediately highlights the danger of the situation. Pretty good way of getting the reader to know what to worry about and all that My only complaint is that there isn't much in the way of establishing firmly who exactly these characters are. We don't really get a good grasp of who they are beyond what is happening in the moment or their titles Other than that, this is a pretty decent way to start a story. Just hope that the world and characters gets expanded on more beyond what is happening in the moment :)