Hooked me with the title, kept me with the story. This book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
Nice. Only that things are happening too quickly without breathing room.
honestly. I liked the premise but as you said in the new description—you kinda messed up. But can I take reference of your story in a novel I might just create—I'll probably just take inspiration from every novel I liked to redo my first one