~~ As of Chapter 152 ~~
Iβve really enjoyed the story so far!
The writing quality is pretty solid. There are a few minor errors here and there, but I can always understand what the authorβs trying to say, and thatβs what matters to me. So, writing quality gets a 5/5 from me.
The storyβs development is really well paced. There havenβt been any big frustrating or logic breaking moments just to push the plot forward, which I appreciate. Another easy 5/5 for this.
Now, the character design is where this novel really shines, in my opinion. Itβs not just the MC, every character has their own unique personality and vibe. Itβs not a bunch of cookie cutter interactions, which keeps things fresh. I also love how the MCβs abilities have a lot of potential but arenβt overpowered (yet). Instead, he relies on his intelligence and self awareness to manipulate situations to his advantage. But hereβs the surprising plus point: his plans can fail. Heβs not some perfect, untouchable MC, which makes him feel more real. Definitely a 5/5 for character design.
Update stability? Well, I binge read up to Chapter 152 in one go, so no complaints there! Another 5/5.
The world building is solid. The author clearly took inspiration from Bleach but added their own twists to make it feel fresh. While some major plotlines are similar, the way they unfold is different and interesting enough that it doesnβt feel like a direct copy paste.
Overall, this has been a really enjoyable read for me. Sure, there are a few things I might have done differently (personal preference), but the results are still satisfying. Full marks, 5/5!
~~As of Chapter 152 ~~