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2024-12-07 09:23

Really good FF and translation, hope u continue this!😎

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~~ As of Chapter 152 ~~ I’ve really enjoyed the story so far! The writing quality is pretty solid. There are a few minor errors here and there, but I can always understand what the author’s trying to say, and that’s what matters to me. So, writing quality gets a 5/5 from me. The story’s development is really well paced. There haven’t been any big frustrating or logic breaking moments just to push the plot forward, which I appreciate. Another easy 5/5 for this. Now, the character design is where this novel really shines, in my opinion. It’s not just the MC, every character has their own unique personality and vibe. It’s not a bunch of cookie cutter interactions, which keeps things fresh. I also love how the MC’s abilities have a lot of potential but aren’t overpowered (yet). Instead, he relies on his intelligence and self awareness to manipulate situations to his advantage. But here’s the surprising plus point: his plans can fail. He’s not some perfect, untouchable MC, which makes him feel more real. Definitely a 5/5 for character design. Update stability? Well, I binge read up to Chapter 152 in one go, so no complaints there! Another 5/5. The world building is solid. The author clearly took inspiration from Bleach but added their own twists to make it feel fresh. While some major plotlines are similar, the way they unfold is different and interesting enough that it doesn’t feel like a direct copy paste. Overall, this has been a really enjoyable read for me. Sure, there are a few things I might have done differently (personal preference), but the results are still satisfying. Full marks, 5/5! ~~As of Chapter 152 ~~

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