The mc has the pride to not kneel and beg for mercy but contradictally can’t stop the world walking all over him. If the end of the book doesn’t have everyone kissing his feet this truly is the biggest cuck beta mc I’ve read in a few years

Well it was pretty good, I read it until the end. As a bleach fanfic, this one is pretty good overall. For anyone who wonder if this already end or not, the answer is yes, this fanfic already ended at 841 chapter. Quite fresh in my opinion, cause this is the only fanfic that develop some interaction with Aizen (a bit of spoiler but yeah, MC and Aizen kinda have enemy ~ friend relationship).

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Hi reader's, please do drop a review if you caught up with the chapters. TIA! Btw, im only translating this and i do not own any right in the original work.

~~ As of Chapter 152 ~~ I’ve really enjoyed the story so far! The writing quality is pretty solid. There are a few minor errors here and there, but I can always understand what the author’s trying to say, and that’s what matters to me. So, writing quality gets a 5/5 from me. The story’s development is really well paced. There haven’t been any big frustrating or logic breaking moments just to push the plot forward, which I appreciate. Another easy 5/5 for this. Now, the character design is where this novel really shines, in my opinion. It’s not just the MC, every character has their own unique personality and vibe. It’s not a bunch of cookie cutter interactions, which keeps things fresh. I also love how the MC’s abilities have a lot of potential but aren’t overpowered (yet). Instead, he relies on his intelligence and self awareness to manipulate situations to his advantage. But here’s the surprising plus point: his plans can fail. He’s not some perfect, untouchable MC, which makes him feel more real. Definitely a 5/5 for character design. Update stability? Well, I binge read up to Chapter 152 in one go, so no complaints there! Another 5/5. The world building is solid. The author clearly took inspiration from Bleach but added their own twists to make it feel fresh. While some major plotlines are similar, the way they unfold is different and interesting enough that it doesn’t feel like a direct copy paste. Overall, this has been a really enjoyable read for me. Sure, there are a few things I might have done differently (personal preference), but the results are still satisfying. Full marks, 5/5! ~~As of Chapter 152 ~~

Really good FF and translation, hope u continue this!😎

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Read till chapter 193. and ... its NOT worth it. It all falls to the MC. Mc is a what should i say.... A easily pushed around guy All the time for all or most chapters...just for authors twisted sense of showing comedy. i believe he thinks this is comedy, and fun? That doesn't mean the mc is Always pushed around. But 92% of the time he is. So its not my cup of tea. Another reviewer said it best, very crudely mind you, 'MC is beta'. But its not about Alpha or Beta. You will see what i am talking about when reading.

The Main Character is pathetic.

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