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it was good until you made him become rias gremory boyfriend
Damn, people are too negative bro. Support the author so he can improve and do better. Author-sama I recommend you to delete reviews that are just plain stupid.
Only interesting thing was Anos but the narration is literally just bad...simply bad enough to tire someone out🙄
Okay, I like this work. Maybe the first two chapters you won't like. But after that, it gets better. Like everyone else, the Author gets better with every chapter, and I hope to see more of it. Great job Author-san.
Its fine nothing crazy about it seems forced in a way. the writting feels plain like no emotions from anyone and its hard to write like that idek how. and then mc telling koneko about kuroka is forced. And theb mc acting like he wasn't intreasted in rias to dating is to big of an change you can hold on and not force it which you did and thats where i seen this fic being meh not great or very bad.
It’s not great or really good the author has a lot to work on the narration isn’t great and the mc is an even worse version of the already abysmal original anos
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It’s like author is speedrunning the story no substance no unique details just McDonald’s fast food of fanfics, mc is “op” but cant use most of his stregth cause he too powerful has all of anos healing but cant solve sleeping disease for his human mother? Says he watches anime knows nothing bout dxd yet finds out everything bout everyone upon first seeing them, has one conversation with rias then thinks he’s in love with her like in the nicest way possible maybe rewrite it to make stuff coherent at least
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Don;t know where to start author just assume everything , no consistency of thought , no character of mc , rapid narration change. ..........
