Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story
I read all your histories, hope one day u do a Alexander the Great based novel. or one in Germany before WWĺl. love your write.
It’s a “SorryImJustDiamond” Book what did you expect
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10/10 great novel loving every second of it
WOW. This is a great find, I really hope you continue with this it has the potential to be so amazing. Good job author you have my support!
I am at ch 60+ however it is different from your other works are you using AI on this?
A interesting and incredible story that deserves to be read! An dtoryline that get you intruigt and close to the world with the background not lacking!
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Pretty fun Mc nation is basically Madagascar