The Paladin in the Abyss

I've read 18 chapters so far, and it's really good. it focuses more on adventures, then power progression. the progression is slower than op systems but faster than slow and guaranteed power systems as they don't stay in one place and learn talisman bit by bit. the world building is already large.

A different definition of the role of paladin. Aside from the typical translation issues we normally see on WebNovel (inconsistent names, genders and pronouns), the story is pretty good. It follows Sir Lancelot Durek, a human Knight from one of the many worlds connected to the abyss in this story. A mix of knighthood and cultivation with DnD. Why not give it a read?

Overall a solid story. Sometimes there is a bit too much dialogue between characters that seems to flow without stopping, which becomes odd in certain scenarios like the party being in the middle of combat or having a family dinner while escaping an exploding slave den. While it does get somewhat overwhelming, the characters are well developed and expressive and I am never left wondering what theyre thinking about. Writing wise, there is a glaring inconsistency. In the beginning, there is an explicit distinction made between devils and demons, as well as the names of their various subspecies. This is lost around 70 chapters in where everything just starts to be called a “demon” and their subspecies names become lumped in as random demon species. It gets very confusing at times, with instances such as fallen angels being called “sucuubi” instead, when in the movel they are a completely different species.