Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.

Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.

What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.

Hello there Author-san, I had a question regarding the harem developement. Will we be having the primordial mommies join? or will they stay as mother-figures. Also what about other races? or coz so far thers only humans, elves, dwarves and demihumans

This is some real good stuff….do give it a read for sure. The characters are interesting, there is a good storyline. The author loves making us readers happy…especially with those cliffhangers 👀

Hold up I can review this again? Did my previous one get taken down? Coz I checked another new WebNovel and couldn’t post another review

I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.

Hello I have loved this. It is great compared to other slop you would find on here. I wanted to ask if you have written any other wn or are planning to do so in the future

this is one of the rare few good webnovels on here, everything is great about it. author replies to readers and posts daily consistently. the mc can be a bit annoying at times but thats rare and hes a great mc for the most part.

Great stuff, keep up the amazing job. Also a question, how many girls will you have in the harem? like do you intend to take blackfang and all three disciples? what about the scarlet lillies and the princess? thank god that this time the fool recomended a good wn unlike last time LMAO. OneEyedKing you retarded idiot 😭

I have heard good stuff about this from a friend. Seems interesting, looking forward to how it progresses. The art for the characters is looking beautiful too

Hmmmmmmmmm this is interesting…..I can post another review? 🗿

Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.

Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.

"I'd received a few complaints from some readers that my MC is not a real villain" B#tch your whole title is a massive click bait. Also wtf you mean by Ur definition next what? You gonna redefine Ur whole gender pronouns b#tch. Lol I like how this b#tch gets over defensive over the click bait title he creates and tries to redefine the word to suit his narrative. Also the way this goober tries to use extreme examples like this "u like killing and skining the innocent puppies is this ur ideas of villains." To defend himself of any criticism. This b#tch here will say and do anything to prove his point. Even making up shit on one said and making it seems like it's their ideas than this goober starts giving extreme examples to make them look bad for stating the obvious. Muddy the water as much as possible this donkey should have go to politics with this bullshit going on. As that was enough this clown tries redefined the word whole definition in his own fancy evaporated way. Another r#tard that's just trying to reinvent the wheel. B#tch just stop it, stop acting like smart@ss put down villain word off Ur title. I know it's sounds cool and all but its clearly a click bait and save yourself that last remaining bit of dignity.

I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!

Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D

This story is nice. # no dense MC # no moral dilemma MC # OP MC (we don't wait for years for MC to get strong) # yandere/possessive MC # no harem drama # nice leveling system # FMLs with questionable personalities # different race harem members 5/5

Got to chapter 86 and decided to stop. The novel should be called "The boring life of a transmigrated dude", until chapter 86 the novel was a nothing burger, idle chat, labyrinth grinding, random edgyness out of nowhere, young masters being introduced, that's it. I almost dropped it earlier, but the thought of a novel like death march without a beta mc kinda hooked me, too bad it's nothing like that. Also, locking the reason for the name of the novel behind hundreds of chapters? good luck with that, the quality has to be very high to keep readers interested until that point, and the payoff for the class has to be immense.