The First Magic World War

Aside from inconsistent names, gender and and certain grammatical errors, everything is good from the character to the power system. They only underdeveloped areas are the world and the people not involved in the story.

It would be a pretty okay story if someone could just pick a gender for the main character or established concrete gender fluidity in an accessible way. The inconsistent switching with no reason it makes it difficult to read.

The story has issues with solidifying the gender of the main character, as it jumps between male and female, it makes it quite difficult to read.