Mastermind of the Akatsuki

Not a bad story, but the heavily usage of chat GPT to add more words makes the novel very hard and boring to read...you are a writer bro, just write, idk why are so many "authors" afraid of writing...

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this looks like starting of one of the best naruto. The translation is quite good, tho a sprinkle of chatgpt shows here and there. the chinese jokes have been changed to english jokes which is very well done. The MC believes in mental manipulation and if he was in harry potter verse then he would have surely given dumbdumbdore a run for his greater good. Now we see how he handles naruto world. Give it a try...

The story is good but could you provide the name of the original fanfic as I have already read this.

translation is extremely good I can't wait to read the next chapter

A amazing Naruto story. Translation is perfect . Alot of focus on political stuff, but trust me it 's intresting. MC is extremely smart and shameless. He became strong fast, but with logic. he did not randomly did Nsfw with someone and gained power . It is rare to see Good Akatsuki. I loved it!

I always hated the fics og ending, any chance you can improve it and include a romance, likely with akane? It would make it much better and improved from a usual cn

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A nice concept with potential, we see stuff from pov of some of the major antagonist of naruto and how the mc changes that. To much useless words added from gpt but overall pace is good

This is good fanfic and worth reading ...........................................................................................................................

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Second Review LOL. I have read the whole MTL Novel (Character names was 60% wrong, but I have read servel worse quality MTL than that) ____Back to the topic, The novel was amazing. He stays single whole time, no Harem, no Waifu, no romance(thankfully) Although ending was bit weird. It was amazing overall. Buykuya literally manipulated everyone. __Spoiler! __ Madara and Buykuya became buddies and bullied Obito verbally. At one point, Even Six paths joined Akatsuki. but the gains weren't that great. that's it, no more spoiling.

I'll say it briefly. This story is worth reading. There are 444 chapters in total and all of them are very exciting. Also thanks to the translator who tries for us readers

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think this is the first time I read story where MC join Akatsuki at Yahiko, etc time, and try to make it great organization (although that's because his system).. I like MC/Byakuya characteristic, where he doesn't afraid to killing.. I also liked that he saved Karin mother.. Maybe he can save other character which have tragic death (like Pakura, Kimimaro, Haku, etc)... Can't wait to see what will he do next to strenght Akatsuki.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍

Good novel just keep it up brosky……………….

raw name (English),.......................

Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. 🙄🤔🧐🤨🤪😆

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🤨😅😆🤪

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🤨🤪😆😅

just the fact that the author listened to readers and stopped using chatgpt even though he used it sparingly, anyway this so far is a good novel and am liking it. keep up the excellent work