Item: Mastermind of the Akatsuki
Rating: 5
Author: Rizki_Caturianto

Rizki_CaturiantoLv110mth

2024-07-16 15:28

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think this is the first time I read story where MC join Akatsuki at Yahiko, etc time, and try to make it great organization (although that's because his system).. I like MC/Byakuya characteristic, where he doesn't afraid to killing.. I also liked that he saved Karin mother.. Maybe he can save other character which have tragic death (like Pakura, Kimimaro, Haku, etc)... Can't wait to see what will he do next to strenght Akatsuki.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍

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