Nebula Wars

This story truly captures the emotions of the characters and reading it felt like hearing them as well! I mean! There's always figthing and shouting lols, every chap is interesting and you won't be bored. Plus, the writing is good too! Neat, descriptive, and engaging. That's it. I like the way the author narrates this story, very easy to visualize and understand the flow.

I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too. The only noticable problems would be that after some chapters, there are very long paragraphs in the chapter, which you know sometimes can feel bad. And some words or phrases seems repetitive or it could be for the story and it only felt to me. other then these min or things story is really great and of course the release rate is good.

Well some paragraphs are a little bit long, as I've been told a bunch of times that it sorta discourages readers. Other than that I'd say good job the pacing of the story is fast enough also I like how you aren't stingy with the descriptions it feels like you are really in the story.