your world building was great I enjoyed reading the few chapters I just read.don't give up.

So far the world building is well balanced as well as the power concept in this world. I'll actually take my time and read this book to see where it goes. Great job!

I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too. The only noticable problems would be that after some chapters, there are very long paragraphs in the chapter, which you know sometimes can feel bad. And some words or phrases seems repetitive or it could be for the story and it only felt to me. other then these min or things story is really great and of course the release rate is good.

This story truly captures the emotions of the characters and reading it felt like hearing them as well! I mean! There's always figthing and shouting lols, every chap is interesting and you won't be bored. Plus, the writing is good too! Neat, descriptive, and engaging. That's it. I like the way the author narrates this story, very easy to visualize and understand the flow.

This story stood out in my library. The writing style describes how the scene moves. However to me, it was too many long paragraphs, so sometimes it would be confusing to read. But with how interesting the character design was, it works best to cover it. Well done, and good job for the author!

I was a little confused at first but after reading it carefully, it became easier to understand. Just read a few chapters and I must say the world is well balanced as well as the power system. I want to advise the author not to join two many words together. Readers don't like reading long sentences and make sure to use commas at the right places. That'll be all for now. Overall, It's a great story. I advise the readers to give it a try.

The one thing about this book that it does astoundingly well is its lack of information-dumping. For me personally, I can't stand when a character just rambles a bunch of information to you, but does it in a clever way.

Truth be told, before diving into this interesting work of fiction, I didn't expect to to be this absorbing. There's no info dumping and the quality is nice. Nice work author 🥰🥰

This story is pretty straight forward and dives into the action and character descriptions. There are some grammar issues and telling vs showing, issues that can easily clear up as the story continues. It is unique in the fact that it reads like a script at times, with only minor repetitive phrases. Overall, interesting portrayal of a story.