Comments of chapter undefined of Souls in Teyvat

Another arch with a blind protagonist... I'm already tired of this cliche, it haunts me everywhere.

man i thought something big will happen after that last warnning yesterday, but it's just this?? bro I'm all in for whatever development route you take that looks good in your eyes. its's your story and I'm here to see how it's unfolds and support you along the way. Keep up what you are doing it's great.

Pensaba que dejabas de escribir. El giro es muy bueno, en mi opinión.

Oh my god I was terrified this fic was gonna turn like dark or apocalyptic and ruin the tone, but that’s it?! I spent my childhood watching Toph Beifong the Melon Lord this is a fantastic development

My only problem is that 99% of the time people cripple their mc's to nerf them. If it's just plot for the story like "they were born this way" or "they received this wound during a great battle" or even "it's because of a tragedy of some kind" then I'm fine with it. Especially because it can be a way to bring some life into the character. But most people don't use it this way. They use it as some sort of weakening factor for their mc.

Thanks for the chapter

its okay, your writing id loveable and i like the mc character its not a problem he is blind or not, i even read a mc whos body is a literally bug. so write story as you deem fun, dont let people judge you

nah bro this is unique and looks like its gonna be really cool

No me molesta, fue una sorpresa, pero siempre que el mc no se revuelva en la autocompasión, todo estará bien, el mc es muy optimista, dudo que le pase eso.

It's your story brother, I'll accompany you as far as you go, and I hope it's until the end.

This sounds a lot like Tenshin

I would like it if his blindness gets him pity from others. But he would still act like a gremlin

I thought Guizhong was gonna die or something so you had me at high suspense the whole chapter. But then the blindness came, I admit I'm a bit disappointed, just a little bit though because I expected worse and I would've rioted if you really decided to kill Guizhong. It's like 2 evils but you picked the lesser one, plus you said it's temporary, and he'll regain it eventually in the future so I'm okay with this, I've read The Blind Swordsman fic after all😂

it's an interesting twist. also it's your story author-nim you can develop it how you want, honestly it's very good so far so continue your work however you see fit, I will support you along the way as this is a great fanfic .

A deficient protagonist? I like

there is nothing wrong with a twist