Thanks for the chapter

Eu não vi a série da Shield e estou com preguiça de procurar quem é a mãe de Annie, diga me autor San.

Hehehe... Seggs

A little fast This chapter?

Excellent writing and plot, the pacing is good and there is never a chapter that is uninteresting, there is great character development and the frequency of chapter releases is very good, I hope the author continues like this and only improves.

Você é um bom escritor

I like the direction it's going and the pacing, there's always something interesting happening but please don't assassinate Tony Stark, I really want to see his interaction with the protagonist.

Good chapter

Amem

Eu esqueci que tu é brasileiro Man, como vai aí? Eu só vejo o que passa no jornal mas um relato pessoal é melhor

Where's the other chapter author san?

Thanks for the chapter

Brozl, Ei is stupid, how do you love her?

He's 12? and please author! tell me if he is the son of grayfia and sirzech, there is almost no fanfic like that, it would be incredible. (Sorry my English)

Delicious

I'm happy for you author

An amazing fanfic, I have zero complaints. is one of the few good things in the web novel, without Segs, without forced characters and with a plot that leaves you wanting more, the only way to improve this work of art would be to post more chapters and make the protagonist suffer a little for I think he deserves it after what he did to everyone hahahaha and to have more POV changes (sorry for my sadistic side). (I'm sorry for my English, I'm brazilian)

F to kenshin

A deficient protagonist? I like

Greg... Hahahaha lol