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Comments of chapter undefined of Ethan's "Marvel"ous Adventure

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harshithvarma1
harshithvarma1Lv15harshithvarma1

Bro the story is good but it doesn't have a proper structure to it. It feels like you are rushing the story and there are so many plot holes in it like how can Ethan become the director of S.H.I.E.L.D when he doesn't even have proper experience in the field and also he is a recruit fresh from the training and others are willingly following him even if it is a secret organization and also the conversation between the characters are all over the place it's like they know each other for a long time even if they meeting for the first time it is also not consistent

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Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Logan? Did you mean James Howlett.

Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Thanks for the chapter

LittleRedsWolf
LittleRedsWolfLv5LittleRedsWolf