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LittleRedsWolf7hCommentedI heard a rumble come from my stomach. I sighed thinking that I may not be able to get some food right in the middle of the night. I looked out the window and opened the window and took a deep breath and smiled and said to myself "I am going to do what I want."- LittleRedsWolf10hCommentedCh 86 Naruto : Uchiha : Chapter 86
- LittleRedsWolf10hCommentedCh 86 Naruto : Uchiha : Chapter 86
- LittleRedsWolf11hReplied to Serenity_Blades
I figured it was a quark of his experience/system.
"What the f*bleep* is that noise?!?" – man told while grabbing his head, grimacing, clearly in pain. - LittleRedsWolf23hPosted
The MC is an interesting concept. It can be executed well with some work. The author needs to walk that line between manic and being a likable and well fleshed out character. From some of the stories I've read, a fully manic/mentally broken MC without any character growth, development, or positive changes tends to drive off some readers. The first few chapters are rough. Chapter 6 is much better. The author shows improvement as they write. I am looking forward to more chapters to update my review again.
- LittleRedsWolf23hCommented
reserved for your*
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*sigh*
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your kind, for who knows how long*
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in the void with you*
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before you leave*
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your love of reactions*
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any malls around*
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I already know yours*
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I still don't know your name*
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Are you adverse to swearing? Is it to keep the novel PG-ish or is it something else? Just a question.
"What the f*bleep* is that noise?!?" – man told while grabbing his head, grimacing, clearly in pain. - LittleRedsWolf1dReplied to BobaSlim
It would allow them to work when they are asleep, and then they would have all day to do whatever they wanted.
"Initially, I wanted it applied on the whole thing but now, I was thinking it should only be applied on certain locations or structures. For example in our in-game Vgames office. We can set time dilation for the office building so we can get more work done in a short amount of time. We can also extend these facilities to certain research organizations." -Ven - LittleRedsWolf2dCommentedCh 6 Consequences
- LittleRedsWolf2dCommentedCh 6 Consequences
- LittleRedsWolf2dCommentedBut, honestly. . . the Citadel can't even be really called a city. It's a f*bleep*ng country, if it was medieval time, word 'empire' would naturally come to my mind. It has 5 colossal . . . wings? Arms, legs, tentacles? Doesn't matter, on its every appendage lies a single city, which I presume can host an entire race and still have some place for . . . something hidden.