MrLarsBar
I have actually enjoyed this fanfic more than your DC one....and despite what you called to much smut in this particular fanfic I find that you've been adding enough,if not more than enough plot before, in between and/or after the smut to make up for it.....especially when compared to your DC fanfic. . . . But all and all...I have enjoyed this fanfic, so keep up the good work!
Dialling back the smut will actually be a good thing. The thing I love in this story compared to the DC one is that it fleshes out the story more and aint just shut with a bit of a story. The smut is good if it advances the plot, for in this case, humilates a prominent character but the more story content the better.