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Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Man of Earth 65

robertibrown93x
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I have actually enjoyed this fanfic more than your DC one....and despite what you called to much smut in this particular fanfic I find that you've been adding enough,if not more than enough plot before, in between and/or after the smut to make up for it.....especially when compared to your DC fanfic. . . . But all and all...I have enjoyed this fanfic, so keep up the good work!

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Drojam
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Thanks for the chapter. I get what you mean in your author comment, this was almost fully smut. I tried reading your DC story while waiting for this to update, but it was just way too much smut and raceplay for me, I really hope this story won’t go the same way as I’ve liked it so far.

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KsoGhost
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Gotta be honest chief, had to skip this one

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Hyraken
HyrakenLv4Hyraken

This is much better than DC fic, just need more chapters. I am just waiting for the moment when MC will travel multiverse. MCU and other Marvel and realities.

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jahmii
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i was actually gonna comment that u should dial back on the smut a bit, glad i wasnt the only 1 that noticed, every 5 chapters or so is enough for this since its supposed be mostly plot

Harem_Seeker
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ray_davis_2420
ray_davis_2420Lv4ray_davis_2420

dail it back a little. but otherwise focus on the story and add it when plot demands it.

Lee_Gregory
Lee_GregoryLv4Lee_Gregory

Dialling back the smut will actually be a good thing. The thing I love in this story compared to the DC one is that it fleshes out the story more and aint just shut with a bit of a story. The smut is good if it advances the plot, for in this case, humilates a prominent character but the more story content the better.

HeavenlYdemoNgoDs
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I was enjoying reading this fiction until the previous chapter, but I was disturbed by what happened in this chapter, such fetishes are not in my area of ​​interest, I will leave this and wish you success on your path.

Mathew_Gibson
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GODLIKEVERGIL
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KingWoodedForest
KingWoodedForestLv4KingWoodedForest

I like the pure smut! There's probably not much that can turn me off so the race play in G.R was cool too. Honestly, vanilla is so boring. That's why I like your stories so much.

Jayasavage
JayasavageLv12Jayasavage

This was weird, that was weird. Weird.

Hollow_Daoist
Hollow_DaoistLv4Hollow_Daoist

thanks for the chapters

General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3General_Mahoraga

thanks for the chapter

Daoist796063
Daoist796063Lv3Daoist796063

I like the level of obscenity, not so much in this chapter but the others do since they are part of the plot, still thanks for the update, you made my day

DIMIE_21
DIMIE_21Lv4DIMIE_21

Nah you cucked TONY STARK

TyrantTron335
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First