Time to become immortal. I'm sure he has something in his back pocket, whether it's klarion or something to do with his powers evolving to siphon the of Vandal his immortality he got from the unique energy of the meteor.

Time to become immortal. I'm sure he has something in his back pocket, whether it's klarion or something to do with his powers evolving to siphon the of Vandal his immortality he got from the unique energy of the meteor.

Good chapter. Hopefully, the blood thing was bluff or the unique properties of his blood with extremis have a safety feature where it destroys itself on a cellular level if outside the body. maybe it burns itself or something. Don't need no blood shenanigans. Alwasy energy wrote well, and clones are always a cop out also.

I love your stories, but Jesus christ are the chapters unneedingly short for no reason, barely progress the situation whatsoever and take forever for another chapter to come out. It's tiresome.

That's perfectly fine, and the explanation is sound. Christ, if you make him closer to the comic one down the line with him, maybe building an immunity to mind control, the more it's used on him, then that's a good explanation. Maybe even bring back the fact that the Hulk grows bigger the angrier he gets. MCU removing that since cgi, I guess, along with other thing

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Hulk being controlled should literally be removed from this tbh. The MCU, really adding that to the Hulk, was dumb and made no sense. Should have just kept Hulk closer to his comic counterpart. He is literally too angry to be controlled by someone like enchantress. At least when it was done in the midnight sons gane there was an explanation behind.

Good chapter, though either way writing and phrasing wise.

It's just a crane. That cliffhanger is highly unneeded, not gonna lie. Mr. Negative is out here taking these L's living up to his negative namesake.

It's an expression. It means the same they just add Jose to the end. There is probably a reason, but I don't know what it is.

Future foundation, it's been most of the time I believe

I love this story, but this chapter has barely moved forward. The last few chapters have barely moved the story forward and are way too short for how long it takes for another chapter to come out.

fantastic chapter.

There are way too many plot points in this story at this point. You gotta trim the fat before it gets too much. Zoom has to die no ifs or buts. Somehow, the whole chapter was spent on kara's decision when that could have easily been shortened to advance the story more. I'm sure they are ways to get to the point you're going without dragging it out as long as you did while still advancing the story.

Spiderman doesn't have a no kill rule. He will kill if it's really needed. He won't like it, but he will do what needs to be done if others are threatened.

I don't know if it's just me, but I swear you have given negative, more presence and strength compared to what he should have. He is strong, don't get me wrong, and so are the hand and crossbones....kinda. I'm good with upping strength if it's justified. I just hope Felix finally learns his full strength soon and learns that holding back is never a good thing.

That's a shame. I didn't want Steve Trevor in the story after he died. X could easily do it himself. What exactly is Steve gonna bring to the table? Flying a plain and being fodder?

I love this story, but with how long it normally is between chapters and how short each chapter is there is never a huge amount of progress.

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Let's hope there are no blood shenanigans or that his blood is so messed up and coded to his dna is cannot be broken down and replicated because of the powers he has.